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Message thread at CPP
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**** Writers and Book Lovers ****
post one of your favourite books and your story and you're in, there are competitions for best stories i want to make a club called Writers and Book Lovers just post one of your favourite books and your story and you're in but you can just write one chapter, there are going to be like, competitions for best stories so you better be very keen. i would like my club elegant and sleek. other parts can Admin3 do it? She's the best admin on art . they can talk about ideas and we're going to make up a big story when we hit every 3 months. i'm looking for vice presidents and i am going to have two, to make it fair the first 2 who wants to be VP is the 2 VPs.this is a fun club and you can just post Can i join? i am writing a book called............ or can i join i'm reading a book called............ hope you enjoy! | fluffy23 & Moonlight | 2011-08-30 14:07:05 | | Welcome to your club! | Jane Crandal & JB | 2011-08-30 23:21:24 | | it's alright don't worry if you join in you're a part of the book lover family | fluffy23 & Moonlight | 2011-09-01 07:21:42 | | Can I Be VP ? Oh Can I Join Candra And I Am Reading A Series Called The Worst Witch And Phantom Stallion. | purplo9 & Midnight | 2011-09-01 10:22:25 | | Can I join? | JerseyGiantFan & Sneakers | 2011-09-01 12:00:33 | | Can I join? I've writen War Paint and Help! | arabluv & teapot | 2011-09-01 12:50:40 | | sure 1st place in for VP! | fluffy23 & Moonlight | 2011-09-01 23:22:00 | | I will join too!! | MAC1023 & King | 2011-09-01 23:53:09 | | okay here is the first 3 chapters of my new series and the first book i'm writing:
it's called Absolutely Horse Crazy #1 Mystery Horse
Chapter One:
Rosy Monte heard her mum and dad saying about their problems with money and their living. “. It’s so hard for all of us and we can’t afford for Rosy’s school fees. We can’t also find a job enough to pay for our house and our food fees too.†signed Rosy’s mum. “Here they go again.†Rosy said as she rolled her eyes.
Rosy was horse crazy since she was five. She took riding lessons but have to pay for them by herself by working at the stables. She took lessons on a horse named Star at Winter Creek Stable.
Her mum and dad were very poor and worked night and day for their living fees.
No one would be Rosy’s friend as Emily Nightingale just had to tell everyone about Rosy being poor. Though everyone thinks she is a poor, there were two friends that knows the real Rosy. Their names were Izzy Maple and Angel Sky, they were both also horse crazy and had their own horse, rosy was the only one though without one.
She looked at her model horses and said “I wish you guys were real.†She turned her light off and went into her bed. She looked at the night sky and saw a shooting star and wished “I wished to have a happy life with my family and my own horse and don’t have to have any problems.†She sobbed and tucked her face into her pillow, her blonde hair were tangled and then at last she went to sleep as the last tear stroked down on to her face.
Chapter two:
Next day, Rosy jogged to the Winter Creek Stable. It was 2.5 kilometers far but Rosy didn’t care, she wanted to see Star and her friends.
As she got to the stables, she groomed Star and took her for a ride.
On the way she met Izzy and Angel on Heaven (Angle’s horse) and Winter (Izzy’s horse, “So do you want to come for a sleepover next week at my house? Mum said we can stay up all night if we want to.†asked Angel to her two best friends. “Sure!†said Rosy and Izzy in unison. They all laughed together when Emily Nightingale came their way. “You are such a disappointment to this stable. I can’t believe they even let you in!†Emily hisses at the girls as she flipped her ash brown hair which was in a pig tail as she rode Rad. “Ah!!! I can’t take her any more, not even a second!†whispered Izzy to her friends.
Just then, Star started galloping and bucked Rosy off and went in to the wild. “Ms Wesley, help!†shouted Rosy. She tried running after Star but it seems like every bone in her body was broken into pieces. “Izzy, Angle, go after Star! I’ll call the ambulance.†shouted Ms Wesley as she took out her phone. As for Rosy everything gone blurry and then in ten seconds, everything gone black for her.
Chapter three:
“Rosy, Are you okay? Star bucked you off.â€Rosy’s mum said as she holds her hand in hers. “I’m fine and I can’t believe Star bucked me off anyway how is she?†Rosy asked as she looks to see if there were any major injuries. “Star’s fine but we decided if Star bucks people off her back, we can’t use her as a school pony anymore, we have to swap her with a horse more trained.†said Ms Wesley sadly. “Swap her, Swap Star? You can’t do that, she’s the horse which got me in to all of the shows, stables and all the work and jobs I’ve been through!†Rosy shouted as tears streamed down of her eyes like a water fall.
Rosy walked away though there was a horrible pain in her shoulders but she didn’t care, she just wanted to get away. After a while she got to their house. Just in one minute, she realized that Izzy and Angel were following her. “I’m so sorry and I know you must be in such a pain!†whispered Angel. “I am!†Rosy said as she opened the doors to the house.
Just then she sawed that her mum and dad were following her too. They all sat down and gave a cast to Rosy for her broken arm. After, Rosy walked into her bedroom and cried softly in to the stuffed horse she bought with some extra money. “Star, I’m going to miss you so much†she said as she cuddled the stuffed horse and closed her eyes.
| fluffy23 & Moonlight | 2011-09-03 00:35:50 | | I can be the second Vice President.
PLEASE VOTE FOR MY STORY IN THE AUGUST SHORT STORY CONTEST!!!! | MAC1023 & King | 2011-09-03 01:18:12 | |
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