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April Story Contest 10 and under

April Story Contest





Jane Crandal & JB
2012-03-30 23:26:10
title baloon

by sleek pony

One time there was baloon so i took a hold of it outside and it went away with me in the sky.the end

Sleek Pony & Pal
2012-04-01 00:56:31
TROUBLE
By:Pumpkin Pip

I dawdalled out of the classroom, slung my rucksack over my shoulder and walked to the bus.
I reached the boundry gates and sighed. It seemed as if this was going to be the last day of freedom. Suddenly, the bus came speeding round the corner. Dust clouded round me. The doors swung open and a crazy man was waving about in the bus.
"I've had the worst day of my life! First it's rats and then it's weird old people!"
I gazed at him in dispare. Walking to the back of the bus, I heard fast footsteps. It was Rosie, my best friend, running to catch the bus.

Soon enough the bus was cramped with kids ready to get home for the Summer holidays.
A teacher stumbled up the stairs with a list of names on a clipboard and a pencil.
"Jake, Fred, Lily, Summer..."
"Yes" they chorused.
The teacher carried on calling names checking everyone was here.

After a while, me and Rosie got off the bus and climbed the steep hill.
"See you soon Jess!"
"Bye Rosie!"
We both went our seperate ways.

When I got home I found an interesting note stuck to the postbox.
It was a reminder for...ME??!

DON'T FORGET TO EXCERCISE JACK
AND MAKE SURE YOU DO IT WELL
BECAUSE YOU WON'T HAVE LONG...
Is what the note said.

I walked into the house, dumped my rucksack on the floor and ran out to see Jack waiting for me in corral.
"Hey boy."
*NEIGH* Jack whinnied.
I put his little headcollar on his cute head and led him out. We walked into the excercise pen and he tried to rear up a little.
I lunged him well. I carefully pulled while calling him. He came straight towards me. His ears were pricked forward and his tail was held high. I knew he was listening to everything I said. I took him back into the corral and let him go.

Suddenly, I heard a truck coming up the drive.
"Hey Jess," said my dad. "Do you remember Mike?"
"Dad, you didn't did you?!"
"Yep."
"DAD!!!"
"What?"
"He's annoying and... nevermind"
"Hello Jess. How lovely to see you again, all grown up."
"Yes, isn't she mother." Mike said with a smirk.
I made faces at him until dad noticed. He stood on my foot and nudged me as if to say 'stop it'
"Let's go inside." dad suggested..........
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HOPE YOU ENJOYED IT!!!
PLEASE VOTE FOR ME!!!!!!
there's more. I will post part 2 soon.

pumpkin pip & Gemini
2012-04-01 10:21:05
TROUBLE
part 2
P:S this is the proper part 2.

PREVIOSLY:
Jess and her best friend Rosie got on the bus to leave school for the summer holidays.
When she got home she found a note telling her to excercise her little foal, Jack.
Her dad told her Mike was coming to stay.

We went inside to have a hot drink.
"So tell me Mike, are you into horses much?"
"Kind of."
"Well, why don't you go and see Jess's foal, Jack?"
"Ok."

"Right then, I better be off."
"Ok, well we'll see you soon."
"Bye mum,"
"Bye Mike."
Mike's mum got in her car and drove away.
"Right Jess. Go and show Mike Jack then."
I took Mike out of the room and went to see Jack. I knew he was going to pull a stunt anytime soon. And he did.
Mike stayed by the door and told my dad that I left him there and my dad beleived him!

I HAD TO DO SOMETHING!!!

"Come on Mike. I'll show you Jack." I said hesitantly.
"Good," my dad mumbled.
I took M

pumpkin pip & Gemini
2012-04-03 21:50:47
RIGHT, I AM GOING TO RE-WRITE PART 2

TROUBLE
part 2

PREVIOUSLY:
Jess and her best friend Rosie got on the bus to leave school for the summer holidays.
When Jess got home she found a note telling her to excercise Jack, her little foal.
Her dad told her Mike was coming to stay...

We walked inside the old barn where dad had built
a kitchen.
We all sat down and sunk into a soft chair.
"Hot chocolate Mike?"
"Um, yes please."
"Coffee please dear," said

pumpkin pip & Gemini
2012-04-03 21:50:47
Sundance And Moondance: The begining.


Sundance's mother picked up Sundance's report card. Sundance ran into her room. She got a bag and stuffed her clothes and blankets in there. Her black, long, shiney hair followed the beautiful, native american girl. She went into her sister, Moondances room and packed her things for her. Moondance ran into her room and saw Sundance. 'What are you doing?" She questioned her sister. Sundance grabed her sisters arm, opening the window. The small girl (Moondance) followed after her sister. They troted in the woods and into an abandon shack.
Moondance followed her elegent sisters footsteps into the shack. "Do not move a muscle!" Sundance demanded. Moondance nodded her head. Sundance troted off to pick some flowers to eat. Moondance looked around a saw a silver mirror and picked it up. She saw her beautiful face and her long black hair covering her it. Suddenly, she saw a man approching her sister. "SUNDANCE!!" Moondance shouted from a distance. "WATCH OUT!!!" Sundance looked behind her shoulder to see a man with a beard holding a bag in his hand touching her arm. She ran as fast as she could into the shack. The man followed her. In the end, he captured both girls. The screamed and cried. "STOP IT!!!" Sundance cried. Tears were running down her cheek.
The car he carried many girls in stoped. He opened the trunk to see everyone there. One by one he carried them to the basment. 'He is toying with us." Sundance said. A familiar face nodded to her. "Maybe he has left things for us to get so we can leave." Said a girl. They all nodded. Moondance found a crowbar, knife and a saw. Everygirl tried to pry open the door. When Sundance tried it worked and made a clanking noise. "RUN!!" Screamed Moondance. All the girls got out saftly.

Rock on Jimmy Dean & Candy
2012-04-05 15:44:47
The taking
Rock on Jimmy Dean


Sundance's mother picked up Sundance's report card. Sundance ran into her room. She got a bag and stuffed her clothes and blankets in there. Her black, long, shiney hair followed the beautiful, native american girl. She went into her sister, Moondances room and packed her things for her. Moondance ran into her room and saw Sundance. 'What are you doing?" She questioned her sister. Sundance grabed her sisters arm, opening the window. The small girl (Moondance) followed after her sister. They troted in the woods and into an abandon shack.
Moondance followed her elegent sisters footsteps into the shack. "Do not move a muscle!" Sundance demanded. Moondance nodded her head. Sundance troted off to pick some flowers to eat. Moondance looked around a saw a silver mirror and picked it up. She saw her beautiful face and her long black hair covering her it. Suddenly, she saw a man approching her sister. "SUNDANCE!!" Moondance shouted from a distance. "WATCH OUT!!!" Sundance looked behind her shoulder to see a man with a beard holding a bag in his hand touching her arm. She ran as fast as she could into the shack. The man followed her. In the end, he captured both girls. The screamed and cried. "STOP IT!!!" Sundance cried. Tears were running down her cheek.
The car he carried many girls in stoped. He opened the trunk to see everyone there. One by one he carried them to the basment. 'He is toying with us." Sundance said. A familiar face nodded to her. "Maybe he has left things for us to get so we can leave." Said a girl. They all nodded. Moondance found a crowbar, knife and a saw. Everygirl tried to pry open the door. When Sundance tried it worked and made a clanking noise. "RUN!!" Screamed Moondance. All the girls got out saftly.







Note: This is the revised version, andSo its different. And last time i didntPut my user.

Rock on Jimmy Dean & Candy
2012-04-05 15:54:28
The Garden Of Peace
Rock on Jimmy Dean

Swish! The sound of Iris's wings in the wind. The small fairy went to the fountian to get some water. Mist, Crysanthemum, Lilac and Orchid were flying after her. "I wish I was as fast as you Iris!" Lilac wished. Iris passed out tin buckets to put water in them. They filled up and went into the sparkling barn to feed there pegasi. Crysanthemum went to look at her pink winged purple coated pegasus. She looked in side the stall only to see the bedding inside of it. "Where is Lily, my pegasus!?" She cried. "ALL OF OUR PEGASUS ARE GONE NUT HEAD!!" Screamed Lilac. "HOW WAS I SUPPOSED TO KNOW?" Crysanthemum yelled. "Calm down!" Demanded Iris, princess of fairy kingdom. "We are going to find them!" Iris pointed to the corner. "Put your bucket there and go pack!" Orchid was the first to put her bucket there. Clank! The sound of them hitting the floor. They all went to go pack, Orchid got her flimsy bag and packed it with most needy:
Food, water, clothes, and a first aid kit.
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See part two next contest!!
VOTE FOR ME PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!

Rock on Jimmy Dean & Candy
2012-04-05 23:36:10
AUTHOR: PonyLover1709
TITLE: Mystery Pony

Katie sat on a bench outside her parent's horse farm. She was crying because her pony, Mystery,was missing. She tried sighns that said he was a small, brown-white shetland pony. She couldn't ride him, but the ten year old had him for as long as she could remember. Would he ever come back?
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A twelve year old boy named Joey sat on his black horse. He was in a forest, not far from Katie's house. He heard a quiet whinney. It sounded like a horse was in pain. It wasn't his horse, Star. Most people would be scared for a hurt pony, but he wasn't. He grew up around his parents, who were vets. He had Star canter to the spot where the pony whinnied. They heard it again. He jumped off his horse and looked. There it was: A small shetland pony. He looked clean, so he must have been owned. It was a warm, summer day, so most ponies were outside. Did he jump his fence. The pony was a light brown, but not exactly bay. His leg was bleeding. Joey tore off part of his shirt and wrapped his leg. It wasn't that bad. He led the two animals to his house. He put Star in the paddock. "I'll untack you later." He told her. He brought the hurt pony to his dad. He bandeged the hurt leg. Joey told him where he found it, then he went to care for Star.

A week later, Katie headed to Joey's house. They said Mystery was found. There he was with Joey in their paddock, his leg bandgeded. She took him home.


Joey and Katie became best friends. They played everyday, talking about horses.

THE END

ponylover1709 & Oreo
2012-04-07 17:57:44
Show Day
By:ilovesunny
It was the day of the big show,Sarah jumped out of bed look at the calender and realized it was the day of her championship show she rushed into her parent's room and told her mother,then she ran into her room and threw on her show clothes,and she ran out side and got her Arabian black mare Missy ready and in the trailer.When Sarah and her mom got to the show people where there all ready unloading their horses,Sarah ran to unload Missy.When they got into the arena people where brushing,tacking up,and warming up their horses and ponies.Sarah felt a little jealous when she saw a beautiful Paint horse gelding her mom said "don't be jealous I think Missy's better",Sarah "said thank you mom,you really think that","yes,in my mined you and Missy are the best team",Sarah's mom replied.

PLEASE wait for part 2

ilovesunny & Thunder
2012-04-20 00:12:20
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