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December Story Contest Age 10 & Under
To be eligible for voting your story must have a horse or pony in it somewhere. Start your entry like this
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Jane Crandal & JB
2013-12-01 02:05:59
Mia's story chapter 3: A New begining
by: Jannah Rose

two years passed the foal was ready to ride I named him Copper he was a little Firey
Julie helped me tack him up for the first time it
was hard he would shake and twist as we tried
to get the tack on him after an hour we finally
got him tacked up and took him to the arena first we lounged him he took off at a fast gallop when
was on the lounge with the tack "this is normal"
Julie reasured me then it was my turn to get on him it was impossible to get on he shifted and then when I got on him he bolted and bucked and leaped I ended up falling off I had a black eye
and a sprained leg I trained him often he became easier and easier each time....
TO CONTINUED..................................

jannah rose & The Fault In Our Stars
2013-12-10 22:28:53
The new start
By Varonnica

OOFFFF! I said with my sister Michelle chasing my rabbit,Bella. We'll never catch her Michelle said.
Then I had a idea. Michelle, I said. Yeah Varonnica she said despertly hoping for a idea. I
got an idea! YAY she said enthusiastically! Shhh you'll scare her. Oh she said, sorry. Its ok. Ok so well catch her by... TRAPING HER WITH A CARROT! Michelle said! Stalking her. Bu, this will work trust me. Ok but im telling you we should get a box, string, A stick, and a carrot.
Yeah like that will work I said. We seen her chewing on mamas chair leg. Man I hope mama will be ok when Bella gets done with her chairs leg I said.Then we chased her Bella zooming off with speeds at 20 to 35 MPH. Us nocking over mama, papa, the fresh eggs and milk and knocking over the small China Table and every thing else on it. Bella hopped into her cage and closed the door of it with her teeth. Mama and Papa staring straight at us with discuss. IT WAS HER IDEA! We both said at the same time pointing at both of each other. I don't care who did it you bought your self stable work, milking Blossom, getting the left over eggs in the chicken coop, and yes taking care of all the horses and ponys! Bu... No buts now go! I told you we should have baited her with the carrot! Yeah yeah well that's not going to fix our problem. Then mama and papa started to clean up the mess. What on earth happened to my chair! Mama said. Go Go I said! We grabbed a shovel and a basket. Im going to muck out the stalls and you go and do the eggs. I said. Then like allways when we get in trouble saddled up Raven and Mulan and headed up to the hills. We started to gallop but Mulan despertly slowing down by the minute. Come on Mulan then giving her a little squeeze she dropped to the ground with me falling off. Oh i forgot she was preganet with Ravens colt! She's going into labor!
Go and get papa and mama now! I said. She gave one push and out came a foot. I said to Mulan PUSH MULAN PUSH! And out the most blackest colt around. Michelle came With Mama and Papa and said what happened is Mulan alright are you alright! Its ok Mulan had here baby and I helped her.Helped were is this help coming from they all said together. Well Mulans colt was coming out. Wow mama said. You know the best about horse birth
well if so he's all yours well yours and Michelles. Michelle was not here to see the birth so she'll name him. Well, she said. He has ravens eyes and Mulans coat coloring so maybe i'll shall call him Prince. That's a wonderful name! Mama said. We road back in our horse trailer with Raven, Mulan, and the future of Ravens blood, Prince.

THE END

Varonnica & Vizeryn
2013-12-16 18:32:38
Hi, Mrs. Crandal. Can you please remove my first entry and replace it with this one? Thanks!

Racehorse Trouble
By: CharlotteandtheStarlet

~Prologue~
One cold Saturday morning, Evelyn Winters woke up to the beeping of her alarm clock at 6:00 am. She got up wearily, had a quick shower, changed and went outside. She breathed in the cold spring air and pulled her long wet blonde hair into a ponytail. As she walked down to the stable block at Preston Racing Stables, she found a sugar cube in her coat pocket. When she reached the stables, she patted every horse she passed until she reached her favourite.


"Hello, Blaze. Are you ready for your workout?" Evelyn asked Blazing Star, a fiery chestnut stallion (Evelyn's favourite). Blazing Star was the 'star' of Preston Racing Stables. He nodded his head, as if to say yes, so Evelyn gave him the sugar cube and she headed off to the tack room. When she reached the rack room, she tried to turn the light on but it didn't work.


"Ugh, David hasn't got around to telling the electrician to fix the light bulb yet," she muttered, referring to David Merryfield, the head trainer at Preston Racing Stables. She walked cautiously, but suddenly her foot hit something cold and hard. She fell to the floor and her world went black.



TO BE CONTINUED......

CharlotteandtheStarlet & Angel
2013-12-18 02:55:42
I'm going horse crazy! Part one
by Iamfree


Life seemed to be like a jungle, not really knowing which way I'm going or which way to go. I mean, my mom had been dead for just 2 months when my dad suddenly seemed all discombobulated so he sent me to my aunts, then next thing I knew it I was being all juggled around until I landed rock hard at my cousin Ashley's house. (Actually, Ashley is 11 years older than me and I'm 13.)
But then something happened that changed the entire picture. I met Promise. Let me tell you my story.
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It was one cloudy and soggy Monday. I was lazing around the house moping. Ashley must of been irritated, because she grabbed me by the arm and said "Julie, both me and you need to leave the house!" I was hoping she'd bring me to a movie or ice cream parlor, but, no, she brought to Al's horse auction. An OUTDOOR horse auction, which meant just after two minutes of standing out on the field my sneakers were soaking wet.
The guy at the loudspeaker, Al, I guess, had been speaking unbelievably fast when he moved onto the 3rd horse their.
She wasn't much, just a white 3-year old Arabian mare by the name of Promise. She didn't look very promising, her coat was all messy, but their was a look in her eyes that just drew me to her. But suddenly a commotion right next to be distracted me from her.
"No, no, Daddy! She's isn't pretty! I don't want her, Daddy!" a blond was complaining loudly. I nudged Ashley "Can I get her." Ashley looked up.
"Huh? You want her? Oh-okay." she said uncertainly.
"Who can give me $300?" Al asked, speakers blaring. Ashley raised her hand.
Al seemed to look around, then said "No competition here, folks. Goes to number 1605."
I felt like screaming and jumping up and down and punching the air. And I would of done it, if I weren't in the middle of 150 people, basically.
2 hours later I was at Ashley's house, calmly sipping a cup of hot cocoa while Ashley and two tough-looking guys outside where struggling to unload Promise into the tiny barn that contained only two horses, besides Promise.
I tell you, I stayed in the house waiting until 10:00 PM. Then Ashley came in and told me drowsily "Your horse is settled."
What had I gotten myself into?
TO be continued.

Iamfree & Lost Promise
2013-12-28 18:41:08
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Jane Crandal & JB
2014-01-02 03:34:14
Guys, I'm not stealing this. I made a new account.

Horse Crazy
by Razen22

It was a stormy night. I lay on my bed watching the weather channel, "Tornadoes are heading north of the Strawberry Cafe, be sure to stay indoors and if possible, underground." Said the weather reporter.

"Oh, no. What will happen to the horses?" I said, beginning to hide under my covers. My mom walked upstairs, and as if she heard me say that,

"Worry about yourself for once, not the horses." Said mom.

"But they're living things too!!" I said.

"Yes, but right now you need to get in the basement." Mom said. She sounded more worried than a mare giving birth to her first foal. I grabbed my plush horse, Magic, and went into the basement. As usual, dad was sitting on the couch watching the news. I opened up my computer and watched videos of ponies playing to keep me calm.

"Dad, what's coming and when's it ending?" I said, beginning to worry.

"I don't know, Hanna. I don't know."

The storm passed and I found myself in the closet. I opened the door to make sure everything was alright. It was normal. I went outside to see what had happened. Not a a single tree was standing. Even the strongest homes were now pieces, including mine. I started to cry, but then I pictured a pony being trapped and me rescuing it, and my parents telling me I could keep it. But it was just a wish. Only a wish. Days went on and soon my dad had built us a little house to live in. it wasn't much, but I kept telling myself that it gave more room for the pony I wanted.

"We're going for a drive, hop in the car." Said dad. We drove for 9 minutes and then we were there. There were pastures of ponies for at least 3 miles. We were at the world famous Pony Championships! Dad got out of the car and so did mom and I. Dad left for a second and when he came back, he had a bay pony behind him. "His name is Razen. And he's yours." Dad said, handing me the lead rope.

I pinched myself, hugged dad, and then Razen. My new best friend.

THE END

Razen22 & Razen
2014-01-30 02:02:39
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