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December Story Contest Age 11
To be eligible for voting your story must have a horse or pony in it somewhere. Start your entry like this
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Jane Crandal & JB
2013-12-01 02:05:59
Title: Star and Kelly
By: tinkytasha

"Dad! Dad!" Kelly ran toward the house, her clothes ripped and stained. "Dad! You'll never believe what Star just did!" Her Dad ran out from the barn. "What the heck did that horse do to you!" He yelled at me. Kelly ran up to him, out of breath. "She..." she swallowed, cooling her dry throat. "She jumped over the fence!" Her father froze. "And you fell of?" He asked almost like he knew. "No something worse.

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She continued, "There was a mountain lion and it came up to me and Star, Star reared and I fell off. The mountain lion slowly came up to me, and and Star came to save me. She knelt down so I could get on her! She is like a fantasy horse! She took me home with the mountain lion chasing after us and she jumped the fence! She's amazing dad! Maybe if I train her more I could-" "No!" My dad said, "I cant take any more chances!" He said rubbing his head, "Just take a look at yourself." She stared sadly at her body. She stood firm, "I don't care what you say because last time you said that I couldn't keep her, well, just look at her now! She is a better friend than anyone I've met." She walked to the barn.

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I nickered in her presence. She just looked at me with a gentle smile. She left to get those things that go on my back. "This is an English saddle." She said holding a smaller one than the other one I had. She set it on my back. I whinnied loudly happy to go riding. Kelly smiled wider. "Lets show my dad what we can do!" I was confused. What are we going to do? She ran back to the tack room and took out the thing that goes on my head. She said, "This is a bridle." I got it. A bridle, I have to remember that. She put the stuff on and brought me out to the fences.

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Their was a bunch of fences she called, "Jumps." I got into the place with the jumps. I felt the pressure of her heels and walked forward. I was use to this. After a couple of minutes she pushed me into a canter. We circled around the place, filling the air with sand. Then, she aimed me toward a jump. She was nudging me faster! "No! Your going to fast!" She pushed me faster, I didn't go any faster, I couldn't. Finally she kicked me hard enough I had to go fast. But I couldn't. We ran up to the fence and I didn't have another choice but to stop. I stopped in front of the jump. Kelly flew over my head landing in the dirt. She didn't move, what was happening?


tinkytasha & Star
2013-12-24 01:23:05
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