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March 2014 Story Contest Age 11 & Under To be eligible for voting your story must have a horse or pony in it somewhere. Start your entry like this TITLE By USERNAME

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Jane Crandal & JB
2015-09-16 21:53:00
My Dreamer
By: madimsmall

We were galloping, long strides, with the sun in our face,and the wind flowing threw my hair and her mane. “ Krista called Mom, “come eat breakfast.” “Mom said Krista,” “I had the best dream last night.” “Was it the one when you were riding a horse on the beach.” asked Mom. “Yea,” said Krista. “ Hey Kris”,said Mom, “hurry up and eat your breakfast, your dad needs help outside in the fields.” I was running to go help my dad. We have a huge farm, but we don’t have any horses which takes the fun out of it. “ Hey dad,” said Krista, “hows the field doing, planting anything new?” “ Well said Dad”, “I am planting corn and carrots.” “ Yum,” said Krista. “Kris can you hand me that shovel” asked Dad?
“ Sure,” said Krista. I ran to go get the shovel and I saw my dog Percy playing with a stick I threw the stick and he ran so fast after that stick. “ Kris hurry and get the shovel I need it,” said Dad. “ Here Dad,” said Krista. “ Hey Kris do you want to go to the fair,” asked Dad? “ Sure” said Krista excitedly. I actually thought this might be a trick to get some horses! “ Come on and get in the car we need to get going, it is going to fill up fast” said Dad. In the car I think I was day dreaming. About me getting there and right in front of me is that beautiful chestnut with big dapples that shine in the sun. “ Come on Kris,” said Dad. We were walking around me following him to every crop shop. “ Ugh Dad can we go to see the horses” asked Krista? “ Fine,” replied Dad. Wow that place where the horses are is filled with horses. I could not think of why people could sell these beautiful horses! Then all of the sudden I a horse that looked like the one I have been dreaming of! I could not believe my eyes! “ Oh Dad lets go look at that horse please pretty please” begged Krista. “ Sure” said Dad. I ran over there slowly trying not to spook any horses with my excitement. “ Oh Dad look at her, she's beautiful” said Krista.
“ Wow she is a beauty, lets take a look at her price.” said Dad. “Oh Dad she is only 200 dollars,” said Krista excitedly. “ Can we get he pretty please,” begged Krista. “ Fine we can,” replied Dad. This was the best moment of my life. When my Dad brought him out of his corral, I smiled big. “ Kris what are you going to name her” asked Dad. “ Dreamer” said Krista. “ I love that name, and i think she does too,” said Dad.”Kris i just realized we don’t have a trailer” said Dad.” Oh yea good point” replied Krista. “ Do you want to ride her home” asked Dad. “ Oh Dad that would be amazing” replied Krista excitedly. “Dad put on the english saddle and bridle, and gave me a leg up. I squeezed his sides, and we were off galloping, strides long, with the sun in our face, and the wind flowing threw my hair and her mane. I finally have My Dreamer.

madimsmall & Bruno
2014-03-01 16:00:42
The Lost Horse
By; KorusLover1

I walked out of my cabin on The Fishing Island one beautiful morning. I could hear the sound of the waves hitting the shore and the birds squawking. The sky was clear and it was a wonderful day to go for a ride.
I walked over to my horse, Angelfeather. I brushed her off my white Andy and cleaned her hooves. I put on her white saddle pad that has black dots on it and a red trim. She also had a matching saddle and bridle. I had a saddle pack that matched also, along with matching leg wraps and hearts that clipped on to the right side of Angelfeathers bridle. She was super cute and ready to go. I mounted her and decided that first I should check my P.O. mailbox in town. There was nothing in it. I then decided that I should go to my friend, Brooke's house. She lived on the shore of the island, in a big red cabin that I wished I lived in. She also had a brown Andy with a black mane and tail, along with black by her feet. She had a beautiful star on her forehead also.
I cantered to Brooke's, then parked Angelfeather in front of Brooke's house and dismounted. I walked up the stairs to Brooke's house and knocked on her door.
'knock, knock, knock'
I can see Brooke poking her head out the door to see whom it was. When she saw it was me she stepped out.
"Oh, Julia, hi!"
"Hi, Brooke!"
"How are you?"
"Good, you?"
"Great! Thanks."
I heard my horse snort and I briefly looked over at her. Then I realized that Brooke's horse was missing. I turned my head back and my eyes popped out. Brooke jumped and looked at me weird. Before she could turn her head to see what I was freaking out about, I screamed, "YOUR HORSE IS MISSING!" and started to run down the stairs to where Brooke's horse SHOULD be. Brooke whipped her head around to look. She then screamed and ran down the stairs. She was speechless for a moment, then she screamed, "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH MY HORSE IS MISSING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!MY HORSE IS MISSING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!MY HORSE IS MISSING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
"Brooke, calm down! Lets go have some breakfast at the cafe and talk about it."
"Okay..."

*at the cafe*

I pulled back my chair and sat down, Brooke did the same.
"Brooke, stop breathing so hard, you are going to hyperventilate!
"Anyways...he might not even be COMPLETELY missing. He might have just gotten untied and has run off. Someone might have seen him lately, or he might just be back in a few hours or so."
"OR...HE COULD BE STOLEN!!!!!!!!WHAT IF SOMEONE IS GOING TO HURT HIM?! WE HAVE TO GO LOOK FOR HIM! MY BABY...MY BABY IS MISSING!!!!!!"
"Okay, we will go look for him and ask around in a minute. You should eat some breakfast first, Brooke."
"NO, NO TIME! Besides, I'm not hungry anyways."
"Okay, okay. Just let me finish my doughnut."
'nom nom nom nom nom'
"Done, we can go now."

*out of the cafe*

"Maybe if we go to Goldenleaf stables on the other side of bridge, Carin will have a horse that you can ride while we look for your horse," I suggested.
"I hope"
We ran across the bridge to Goldenleaf Stables to talk to Carin.
"CARIN, CARIN, CARIN!" we shouted when we got there.
"Girls?" Carin said as she turned to look at us.
"Brooke has lost her horse! Have you seen it anywhere?" I said, out of breath.
"No, I'm sorry."
"Do you have a horse I could ride for a while, while I look for my horse?" Brooke asked politely.
"Ya, the grey horse in the stall, right over there. Her name Misty."
"Thank you SOO much, Carin!" Brooke said and ran to the barn.
She gave the horse a pat and mounted her.
"Thanks!" Brooke shouted as she cantered away from the barn. I ran across the bridge and meet Brooke by her house. I mounted my horse and we galloped off to go ask Jasper if her has seen her.

*at Jasper's pumpkin farm*

"Jasper, Jasper!" we yelled as we galloped up to him.
"Yes, girls?"
"Have you seen my horse lately?" Brooke asked.
"Yes, the brown Andy?"
"Ya, that's her." Brooke said.
"Well, I saw her about two hours ago. She galloped towards the gate beyond the hill over there." Jasper pointed to a hill in front of his farm. "Beyond the gate is the witch, Pi, right. But you 'unwitched' her, didn't you, Julia?"
"Y-yes, I did" I said, not realizing that he had started talking to me.
"Then hopefully Pi has found her is waiting for someone to come find her or she is going to ask around."
"Okay, thanks Jasper." Brooke and I said in sync. We then turned out horses and started to gallop over the hill to the open iron gate.
I turned and looked at Brooke, "are you ready to start looking?"
"You bet I am," she responded.



KorusLover1 & Snow Daisy
2014-03-03 00:06:21
A True Desire Chapter 2: A First Impression
by: Jannah Rose

Saturday came by quickly at 8:30 AM Natasha sprung out of bed she quickly changed into a blue american eagle shirt and faded jeans. She went downstairs and quickly made eggs and toast she ate and left the rest for her mother then she pulled on her black rubber boots. Her mother came down in a red shirt and jeans she also pulled on boots and ate breakfast. Then they went out to the car Natasha quickly got in the passenger seat and buckled in her mother did too and she started the car and they left. Her mother was unusually quiet the whole drive there her stare on the road was cold and hard. She didn't seem happy Natasha knew it would remind her too much of her father to be happy. Natasha looked out the window as her fathers farm suddenly came into view there was horses standing under large oak trees in the pasture. The fence was lined with cherry trees the sign Rose Ridge Stables came into view it was a large brown wood sign with large elegent red letters on it. Natasha was the only one smiling her mother parked and got out so did Natasha. Her mother went over to the tracks and she went strait for the barn she walked in and saw many horses bays, chesnuts,blacks and greys all standing in their comfortable stall all of a sudden a groom leading a wild black stallion came charging in the stallion had a thin blaze that ran down his face and into his muzzle he had one small white sock on his right hoof. The groom was struggling as the stallion reared up nervously "easy now easy Sam"
Natasha realized he just called him Sam that was her horse. She suddenly felt the courage to step in and try to calm him down. "it's okay Sam you're fine" she said he suddenly came down and stood quietly snorting. She stroked his forehead calmly
the groom had a disgusted look on his face "Little girls don't work with horses" he said angrily. Natasha looked at him "well someone had to calm him down" she said looking at him she was thinking in her mind why is he mad at me if I calmed him down?

jannah rose & The Fault In Our Stars
2014-03-09 18:20:00
The bestest friends
By: Varonnica

It all started the year of 2013 March 25th a 10 year old girl was in her yard with her horse Leahia and her rabbit Bella. Bella and leahia are the most bestest friends. Leahia ia a foal and Bella is a middle aged rabbit. Leah, for short, hade the most strongest conection with Bella. Leah would always be carful with Bella like not stepping on her and playing to hard. One day when Leah was 2, She was saddling up and putting on the saddle bag vary tightly around the vary end of the saddle to put Bella in. When not looking carfully, Bella was wondering off into the meadow. Leah started snorting and rearing. What's wrong girl? Oh no bella's gone!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! She tacking up real fast. Bella Bella! She yelled.
Bella! There you are! Bella was found digging on a hill of Nilmer's Highland. You cant wonder off like that she said putting her in the saddle bag.
She was finaly home with her animals. Bella was smart and witty. Leah was clever and quick.
It was bedtime and Mays mom was reading her a story. "The end" she said giving her a kiss and walking away quietly. Right next to May's bed was a window. She dozed off.
The next day... She woke up to her family serownding her. What is going on? Sweetie, Bella, Has passed on. Her eyes swelled up with tears. NO NO! She said running outside. She gasped. The grave was in the pen. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! She started crying on the grave. WHY WHY WHY! It started storming she was still outside. Leah took off her blanket and put it on her. And curled up and slowly slep together.
Every day she would vistet her grave and put flowers on it. Later on Leah Passed and the same happened. They were placed next to each other. May said " When I pass on I want you to burry me next to those graves over there she said to her child in the hospital. And so for that day on, Those three friends where burred and in heaven they rode together, Forever and ever.

Varonnica & Vizeryn
2014-03-11 01:50:55
Midnight horseback riding
by CoolHorseRider7891

Julia staggers out of bed, dragging the covers. She quickly puts on her helmet and boots. She runs downstairs, out the door, and into the barn. She walks to Diego's stall, clutching a bag of carrots in her hand. "Hey boy!" she sais as she opens the half-door of his stall. "I brought you a treat." she sais, showing him the bag of carrots. " Here you go, boy!" sais Julia as she gives him one. "Good boy, Diego." she murmurs to him softly. After giving him his treats, Julia jumps on his back and rides him out of his stall and barn. Julia has been riding tackless since she was little. She has tried riding in a western saddle, an English saddle, and a dressage saddle. None of them were comftertble for her. She gallops into the fields in the glowing moonlight, a smile crossing her face. " This is SO COOL!" she yells to nobody, really. She slows Diego to a trot as they approach the pond. As Diego drinks from the pond, Julia notices a tall man yelling " Your in big trouble!" at her. Hmmm, that's funny. He looks just like Dad! thinks Julia. oh no! It is her Dad! Uh-oh! thinks Julia as her father approaches. She is going to be in big trouble...

CoolHorseRider7891 & Warrior of the West
2014-03-12 19:42:59
-I HAVE REENTERED A NEW STORY-
Varonnica & Vizeryn
2014-03-13 18:26:57
A True Gift Part 1
by Varonnica

One day on a stormy night, a mare in her stall waits patiently. The barn was empty of humans. As she rolls on her side she gets up again, and did a few times in-till she got comfortable. The Male next to her watched in the other stall. She stood up and tried to walk. It didn't work so she laid back down and rolled. She pushed and out it came.

All I seen was blur. And a bit of black and white. When I studied my eyes I seen a huge head. I startled a bit a whinnied. But then I got the scent of my mother and calmed down. She was still down to rest. I heard her grunting a snorting. When she got her strength back she rose up and off the ground and started to lick that stuff off of me. I seen that move-meant that she did and I wanted to do it to. I tried to stand up on my long, wobbley, jelly like feeling legs and then... I fell down for no reason. My mom's big head was in the way. So I couldn't get up even if I wanted to. Then she walked over to her trough and started sipping up this clear stuff, and she drank a lot. Then when I started to feel a little feeling in my legs I rose up like my mom and smelt this rich smell coming from under her belly. She dripped this white stuff and I started suckling.

Vote for part 2. Part 2 will be on the 11th on my birth-day! Hoped u liked it! ;).

Varonnica & Vizeryn
2014-03-14 02:07:32
The Escape
By: lydagdolllover

I let out a whinny as I kicked at the door. With one last thud the it smashed open and I made a break for it. Galloping as fast as I dared, I jumped the gate, and I was out of the riding center, but I still did not stop. I ran through the green, grassy field until I finally reached the outskirts of the woods. I looked back one last time. I shook my head. I was not turning back now. Besides, I would get in big trouble if I went back. So, with one last glance, I stepped into the woods. I trotted briskly, wanting to reach the other side as soon as possible. I zigg zagged through some trees and after what seemed like forever, I finally reached the other side. As I stepped out of the woods, I shook my mane loose from the braids from my mane and breathed a smell of the fresh, beautiful valley that stood before me. I looked out at it for a minute, taking in the surroundings that I would now call home for the rest of my days. I then ran out onto the grassy field, and rolled around in it a bit. I looked around for a stream and found one, and I happily gulped down it’s fresh, clean water. I spent the rest of the day running, resting, and exploring my new home. At sunset, I thought back to when human gave me those delicious oats and maybe a carrot or two. And sometimes, if I was lucky, an apple. But I pushed those thoughts away and ate some of the fresh grass and more of the stream water. I was about to fall asleep for the night, when thunder struck and it started to rain - hard! I looked around for a place to sleep. My mane was soaked and wet, and I was cold. I fell asleep under a tree, feeling sad.
The next morning, I woke up, feeling very tired.I thought of my warm stable and human maybe putting on my saddle for a morning ride. I thought of her giving me nice, long grooming sessions. I knew where I had to go.
I galloped across the field once again and did not stop when I reached the woods. I just kept going - until I finally reached the field. I jumped the paddock gate and ran into the still torn down door. There I saw human standing, across the barn. She ran to me joyfully and said, “Oh Chestnut, your home!”

lydagdolllover & Captain Kirk
2014-03-14 02:07:32
Wild horses
By: Varonnica

One Warm day near Moorland A wild horse Named Windy was watching over her herd of wild mustangs.
Near the G.E.D construction site was a man named Bulldozer Bob was starting up his tractor. Out of no where Windys foal Luna ran right in front of the tractor.
Bulldozer Bob stepped out and went to the foal. Luna was hurt badly. The G.E.D does not care about lives so he went back into his Bulldozer and took off to the Oil fields.
Windy galloped tordes Luna. She nugged her to get up. She couldn't, so Windy knew right away that it was dangerous here. Her and her herd abandoned Luna and went to Nilmer's Highland. But during the night before they got there, Cowboys roped and scared away Windy's herd while she was finding water.
When she got back she seen nothing. So she went to Nilmer's by herself. When she got their she seen a girl named Harper sitting on a log sweating really badly. She seen that she looked dehydrated. Windy knew a spot with crystal clear water and she approached Harper really Slowly.
Harper got up and looking behind her was Windy. She gasped. Her eyes filled with disbelief. Windy snorted and bent down. Harper mounted on her back and Windy lead her to Silver Song River. When they got their Harper took off her pants and shoes and socks and dove right in. Windy did the same. Harper said looking at Windy, I cant bealive a wild horse lead me to water she said sipping up some water. Windy splashed in the water. I think I should adopt you. But their are consiquentes. Windy nugged her. Hey! Said harper laughing and chasing Windy in The river.
Vote for part one to hear part 2!!! Part 2 will be on the 11th Of April. Make sure to wish me a Happy Birthday on the 11th of April! hope u liked it!!!!!!!!! ;)

Varonnica & Vizeryn
2014-03-17 03:05:43
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