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Blue Chance Riding Academy
Blue Chance Riding Academy is a prestigous,5-star riding school that is set in the green hills of Kentucky.There are over 400 acres of trails and cross-country course and 200 acres of pasture for the horses.You have been preparing for your chance to ride there since you heard of it long ago.Either you're one of the rich boarders who own A-circuit horses or a working-student that has spent long and hard work to be riding and taking lessons from an astounding english riding champion and/or the western super star trainer. There's room for only four working students if you don't apply in time you can be one of the boarders or maybe a rival competitor.

RM:Jannah you need to be more descriptive cause saying you jump it perfectly for every single thing without details puts this picture in my head which is and I'm not trying to be mean but nothing at all in the least.I don't know if your horse's arch is correct,if your position is correct,if the horse jumped conservatively or over-jumped,I don't know anything the only thing I can picture is a blank canvas.I'm not saying this to be mean I'm just telling you the truth.If your profile is accurate it says that your 11 years old and since I'm ahead of you in school(I'm 3 grade levels ahead in ELA)I want to let you know a few things.Your profile is well written but when ever you write your RPs there not really much good if I were to rate it from a letter average it would be a D,no offense intended.You have the ability,I saw it in your profile but it seems as if your RP is just a quick jot down when you can obviously write on an A level.I don't know if you write like this in real life but if you do,you need to step it up,7th grade writing work has to be well detailed and clear,decent length and easy to understand(but you can throw a hard word in if you want to sound even smarter)7th GT on the other hand is even harder,you have to do what I said above and do extremely well in less then 10 minutes in my class because writing is supposed to come easy to GT people,in 8th grade eventually the same thing applies slightly to it since your brain is more "developed" as you could say.Please don't think I'm trying to be a mean know-it-all or taking a bash at you,it's just I would really like it if I could read more detailed writings from you in RP,don't get me wrong I don't expect a whole page or anything,I just want to see obvious effort lighting that's awesome!I was just wondering cause this is what happened the other day go to horse show,like 5 people show up for English that aren't from my barn,go to school "did you do that thing with the tiny thing on the horse?"everywhere,they mean an English saddle but I didn't show but it makes things excrutiatingly weird.	tylerbt & Vintage
2014-03-05 03:55:21
RM: Tyler, probably because some people on here are from England so only really know English?! Cara: don't worry I'm sure it will be fine. You have two horses then?	SpiritRider3101 & Shade
2014-03-05 19:00:27
RM: I know Ty, my friends in school are all "Yay?" and when I explain to them that I can't just "miss a lesson" they are all like "Yeah, you can." Grrrrrr. Callie: *I put Shadow away.*	JumperGal & Jack Frost
2014-03-06 04:23:07
RM::P very true England Girl!You make me feel dumb ehorse!	tylerbt & Vintage
2014-03-06 04:25:23
RM: sorry I don't get enough time on my laptop to make large descriptive posts i'll try though :) but I have been told my writing in stories is good enough to publish and i've been told by an 18 year old VERY experienced writer that i'm even better than she is... and I even tutor people so.... i'm not "that" bad... and it took me literally 5 minuets in all to write two pages of a book i'm writing and again I don't have time and I have a million different rps to reply to on 3 different sites... I will redo my post and thanks for telling me what you think because it really matters about how my quality is... Clara: * I keep my heels down far and plaster my legs against Brooklyn's sides I give him a nice hard squeeze and ask for a canter right from a walk* Brooklyn: * I come into a canter* Clara: * I circle him and point him to a 3'0 oxer as soon as we are starting to rise I come into a jumping position I keep my hands nice and light on his neck * Brooklyn* I rise and soar over and land my feet perfectly planted on the ground * Clara: * I wait until he is fully landed then I lead him to a 3'8 stone wall jump when we are just rising again I get into postition* Brooklyn: * I jump over clearing it gracefully then landing it ready to continue the course*	jannah rose & The Fault In Our Stars
2014-03-06 22:55:33
Clara: * I lead him to a 4'1 liverpool oxer and get up in jumping position just as we approach* Brooklyn: * I rise nice and high I leap over and land my feet perfectly on the ground* Clara: *I hoah him in a strait line again* RM: so are we going to get the info about the eval for the working students yet?	jannah rose & The Fault In Our Stars
2014-03-07 04:29:26
RM:thank you jannah that was SO much better!I'd give that an A for short on time RP!I write stories to by the way!	tylerbt & Vintage
2014-03-07 04:29:26
Crystal: *goes to back of trailer and lowers ramp. Sees Widow inside pawing the ground and Crystal comes inside the trailer and pets Widow. Widow quiets down and Crystal brings her outside, she walks her around to get her used to her new surroundings*	ameliabrenes5 & Rascal
2014-03-07 20:11:08
Callie: *I brush Shadow and go into the feed room to mix his feed. I then bring it out and tip it into this bucket. I walk up to the ring.* "Um, Rachelle? Can you tell me where Hershey, Rave, and Story are? I want to meet them before I ride them."	JumperGal & Jack Frost
2014-03-07 20:29:29
Clara: * I turn him back on the rail and walk him out as he pants I wipe small beads of sweat from my forehead*	jannah rose & The Fault In Our Stars
2014-03-09 00:45:24