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November Story & Poem Entries Note: Winning stories and poems will be published in Pony Pals Magazine. All entries must be original, meaning that the member who enters them must have written the text. To be eligible the story or poem must have a horse or pony in it someplace. Stories should be suitable for all ages, including younger members. All entries published in the Magazine will earn 500 Wiggins Bucks, the best stories and poems will earn 3000 Wiggins bucks and trophy for the writer.

November Story & Poem Entries Note: Winning stories and poems will be published in Pony Pals Magazine. All entries must be original, meaning that the member who enters them must have written the text. To be eligible the story or poem must have a horse or pony in it someplace. Stories should be suitable for all ages, including younger members. All entries published in the Magazine will earn 500 Wiggins Bucks, the best stories and poems will earn 3000 Wiggins bucks and trophy for the writer.
Jane Crandal & JB
2014-11-01 00:43:41
(NOTE: does not mention horses or ponies. This poem is based off of the sunrise and it was inspired. Enjoy.)

Title: The Lady of the Dawn
By: Horsesforever12

My eyes wide open, staring beyond what I can see
Standing here waiting, ever so patiently
Hoping just to catch a glimpse
Of the Lady who tempts.
Her voice is calling, calling, calling
Like the drop of dew dropping
It is quieter than the breath of wind
But not to listen is a sin
If you do not try you will not hear
The melodious song she whispers so clear
Her voice is tempting,
Almost drenched with yearning
Can't you hear her calling, calling?
Slowly she climbs across the sky
She does not walk, she does not fly
Her feet are little rays of gold
They look so young, but are very old
All the while she is calling,
Taking her time but never stalling.
The velvet sky shrouds us all
In a blanket of night sent to enthrall
It sends us into a dreamy sleep
And there until morn us it will keep.
But I have awoken before I'm due
I'm not sly...or even shrew
I did not mean to offend the night
Yet to see the Lady is my plight.
Here she comes, beyond the Horizon
A creature born and bred from Zion,
Spreading her elegance
Across the Heavens
Shimmering through
The grass beset in dew;
Mirroring the icy ponds
And all the while singing her song.
Her gown is hemmed with pink
And beholds us all with a soft wink
Then the pink turns another hue
Of a dreamy, almost tired blue
He is very sleepy, yet somehow driven
To cross the great expanse of Heaven.
After he has voyaged to another place
Another lights the sky with grace
It is no longer the Lady's dress,
No, that has already taken its egress
This time it is something far lovelier
Yes, at last it is her!
Someone bold yet somehow shy
Someone who is glad and never cries
Someone who is joyful and coy
Someone who never kids or toys
A Lady with hair made of gold
That shimmers for every soul to behold
A lady so tall and so fair
The sky is proud to have room to share
She comes every morn just to see
Every human filled with glee
For now the shadowy night has gone
And here has come the Dawn. ~

Horsesforever12 & Jedi
2014-11-02 00:51:28
Title: A Girl's Best Friend
By: POA Girl1

A horse's life
Excludes a knife
two perfect hearts
is where love starts
A girl's best friend
is a horse who lends
And on this day
in the perfect way
A horse can cure
and make everything pure
All any girl needs
is a horse that also needs!

POA Girl1 & Remi
2014-11-04 20:34:20
Colors of Freedom
by Roncy

The flash of colors, it really seems to fly;
It is like the clouds, the cloak of the sky.
A herd of horses, so proud, so free.
They way they prance; they're royalty.

There's Black, Brown, Gray, White;
Different colors, but together they're a light;
They shine a path for everyone:
Dispite their differences, they have fun.

Only some can see them there
They're in the snow, they have such flair.
A rainbow of horses, all colors, they're dancing!
No matter their color, they're all prancing.

This may be confusing, but look, come see,
We should give God all of the glory.
No matter the color of fur or skin,
Every shade will always win!
-- Roncy






Roncy & Bertone
2014-11-06 20:57:29
May I join
Ashleigh67 & Snow light
2014-11-07 23:05:38
Hi Ashleigh,

This is a contest thread where you can enter stories and poems to be published in the next Pony Pals Magazine. Feel free to enter a story or poem that you've written!

JC

Jane Crandal & JB
2014-11-08 01:36:35
Tittle: The Lost Pony
By Ashleigh67

Chapter one

There once was girl who loved horses and ponies she loved them so much her parents got her one for her 13th birthday she named her pony maddie of course she rode maddie everyday after school she also had two friends named Shana and Synthia they had ponies too named Snow White and black beauty. They were the best friends ever.

Ashleigh67 & Snow light
2014-11-08 05:54:10
Tittle: The Lost Pony
By Ashleigh67

Chapter two

She also made friends with Pam Anna Lulu. She asked lulu do you want to go for a trail ride"? and Lulu said sure" but I have to ask my grandmother if I can she said okay I will " she also lived next door to Lulu as well as Anna Lulu said yes she told lulu should I go to Anna's to ask her if she would like to join us.

Ashleigh67 & Snow light
2014-11-09 03:34:04
Title: The Horse I Didn't Like
By: Nat2


I never saw a horse I didn't like
And that is quite a feat, you know
And I never saw a horse that I hated
That is, until we went to the horse show.

Bays and blacks and flea-bitten grays
All crowded in their separate stalls
Monogramed saddles lines up the walls
And their riders milled 'round in the hall

I brushed past them all, for I wanted my own
Though they nickered and whinnied and stared
I finally passed through the appropriate door
The selection found me quite unprepared

The signs said FOR SALE! A BARGAIN! HALF PRICE!
A white mare turned away from her door
I went to her, a little bit scared from the price
Five hundred? I couldn't afford more

Gently I called her, cajoled her, persuaded
Until she turned and just stared
WIth one blue wall eye and one brown cross-eye
I must admit I was scared

A big Roman nose and a yellowish mane
A set of despairing sagged ears
A pair of buck teeth and a misshapen head
So much as completed my fears

The mare shook her head and snorted at me
I jumped back in shock and revulsion
But gently I touched her on her dark gray muzzle
Though I don’t know what gave me the compulsion

The thing tried to bite me!
I pulled my hand back and scolded her soundly for trying
The salesman walked up and, grinning, he said,
“You’ve found the best!” He was lying

With one of those mysterious smiles
I dropped back from the stall door
The mare tried to bite me again on my ear
I scolded her just as before

But the salesman reached out and tugged on her ear
With a confidant, casual air,
So she pulled off his tie and bit it in half
And started uprooting his hair

I couldn’t help laughing, he looked so confused
As he swatted and kicked her away
Then he picked up his tie, sliced neatly in two
And dove back into the fray

Her halter he gripped with his right hand
His left he put on her nose
But when he tried to calm he down
SHe promptly stepped on his toes

As I went into stitches
He thwacked her furiously
Until she reared and bit him hard
and kicked him in the knee

He fell back and the door slammed shut
The horse watching proudly inside
He stood and examined his pitiful self
While I laughed so hard I cried

The salesman was angry, red-faced and hot
And I tried to calm myself down
But when his rebuke failed to come from his mouth
He managed a weak little frown

“Perhaps I should leave and come back,”
I suggested with a hopeful, sly look
The salesman brushed back his nibbled-on hair,
And the bait I’d cast out, he took

“Yes, that would be nice,” he said with a smile
“Come back, and this time bring money!”
So I sauntered away, turned a corner, and ran
Forgetting that, while it had been funny

I was supposed to pick a horse
For it was my birthday
And while I’d seen a few I’d liked
I couldn’t bring myself to pay

For I’d see the horse with mismatched eyes
With her ugly, big-toothed grin
And though I’d have a pretty horse
I’d just see her again.

I passed through them all and then found my mom
Smiling around at the stalls
I reached her and opened my mouth
But before I could speak, she called,

“Oh, dear, did you find the horse of your dreams?”
Was that supposed to be funny?
“No, actually, Mom, I’d prefer a bike,
“So here is the rest of your money.”

With a perplexed little smile she took the bills offered
And quizzically looked down at me
And said, quite simply, with one cocked eyebrow
“Is there something I need to see?”

“Um, no Mom, that’s fine,” I said with chagrin
“There’s really nothing that way.”
SHe pulled me along, i’d been caught in her wake
And I brought up the courage to say,

“Okay, okay, fine! There’s this real ugly horse,
“And a salesman that could talk off your ear!
“Mom? Where are you looking? Hello? Earth to Mom?
“Mom! Look down here! I’m down here!”

But she was entranced by the horse of her dreams
And ignored my plaintive cries
For the ugliest mare that you ever did see
Was living before her eyes

“Oh great,” I thought, as my mother went forth
Her hand out like one in a dream
And that, that evil horse with the wicked buck teeth
Was as gentle as she could seem!

Gentle little nibbles on my mother’s palm
And an under-the-eyelashes stare
What could my mother even see in that thing?
Some beauty that wasn’t even there?

“This is the horse,” she murmured, in love
As she wistfully stared at the sign
“Five hundred dollars? Oh, Kate, do you mind?”
And then I knew it was time.

Great generals, leaders, emperors, too
All knew when self-sacrifice called
I breathed a deep breath and unclenched my fists
“Sure Mom, that’s fine. Go ahead.”

Her smile was rainbows and sunshine
Fairy wings, gold dust, and dew
All mixed into one as she handed the money
To the salesman, mysteriously subdued

Turns out that the mare, her hooves quite untrimmed,
Had legs about twenty feet thick
A stomach the size of two cougar-filled gunny sacks
And a neck that was more like a brick

“Well? What do you think?” Mom asked as we left
The aberration plodding behind us
“Just think of Caesar,” I comforted myself
“She’s great Mom, and walks with no fuss.”

“But don’t you think she’s badly proportioned?
“I mean, just a little bit round?”
Mom brushed me aside with a humorous laugh
“Kate, that’s a little profound.”

“She’s the perfect horse for me, you see?
“She’s too heavy to rear up too high.”
I thought for a moment and decided on silence
I found my reprieve in the sky

“Pretty white clouds for this time of day,”
I said, steering the conversation off course
“That one looks like an oyster with legs,
“And that one looks just like a horse!”

“Oh, just brilliant, you stupid, dumb thing,”
Was all I could manage to think
“Get Mom distracted by talking about horses!”
I wished that I could just sink

Into the ground with nary a word
But of course it was not to be
For Mom was speaking in a blithe, happy voice
And of course she was speaking to me

“Oh Kate, we can brush her and wash her and clip her,
“And then we’ll check her for lice,
“And we can take her out riding, by ourselves in the woods,
“Oh now Kate, wouldn’t that be so nice?”

NO, I wanted to say oh so bad
That horse is the ugliest thing!
It’s terribly sway-backed and yellowish-gray
What enjoyment could it possibly bring?


But we kept her, of course, in her very own stall
WIth her very own halter and tack
With her very own feed and her very own hay
And her very own pasture out back

I still do not like her, now named Diamond by Mom
And she still does not like me at all
When she kicks anything it is always toward me
But I still have to muck out her stall

Mom, it is plain, doesn’t like to get dirty
But apparently I do, you see
So whenever there’s anything to be done
In the barn, Mom always calls me

In the end, she dug out a place in Mom’s heart
How she did so I have no earthly clue
But she’s here for the duration and as long as I live
There is nothing that I can do

Nat2 & The Price of Valor
2014-11-11 20:54:41
Tittle: The Lost Pony
By: Ashleigh 67
Chapter three
Anna said yes now she had to go to Pam's by the pony pal trail her Lulu,Anna and her went on the trail. There they saw Pam. Pam was training lighting for a horse show. They asked Pam if she wanted to go for a trail ride she said yes. They asked Mrs Crandal if they could go she said yes.l

Ashleigh67 & Snow light
2014-11-16 03:51:49
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