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March Story & Poem Entries Note: Winning stories and poems will be published in Pony Pals Magazine. All entries must be original, meaning that the member who enters them must have written the text. To be eligible the story or poem must have a horse or pony in it someplace. Stories should be suitable for all ages, including younger members. All entries published in the Magazine will earn 500 Wiggins Bucks, the best stories and poems will earn 3000 Wiggins bucks and trophy for the writer.

chapter five: The Bake Sale part 2
by:Ashleigh67
In the morning I told Pam,Lulu and Anna about me and Rae's idea what about after school "lulu said yeah pam said my mum can make the best zucchini pancakes in the whole of Wiggins yeah Anna said my mum can make her famous brownies yeah I said my mum can make her famous Carmel slice and Rae's mum can make her famous shortbread and ice cream when we were busy discussing ideas it was already 8:15 we got Pam's mother to drop us off at school. Mr Livingston was telling us about harmony day [which was on the 20th of march Mr Livingston ask us what country we were from when he asked me where I was from I answered Czech republic wow he said will you make a presentation on that he asked yes Mr Livingston then we did maths then we did reading until lunch then literacy then home time Mrs Crandal picked us up then pam asked Mum can you make you famous zucchini pancakes yes pam said Mrs Crandal why because were having a bake sale said pam Rae's mum is making her famous shortbread and ice cream Ashleigh's mum is making her famous Carmel slice and Anna's mum is make her famous brown after we got to Pam's house I went to my house to ask my mum to make her famous Carmel slices. she made a lot Anna mum is making her famous brownies and Anna's Mum had made lot of brownies you made a lot of money we got to 5,00 dollars we finally got enough money to get the pony that I wanted.
see chapter six to get my pony in next month magazine

Ashleigh67 & Snow light
2015-03-22 15:11:16
WhisperWind Farm Nr.1
Saving a Dream

Chapter 1 : Big News
Kayla walks down the cinnamon colored stalls of WhisperWind Farm. Her leased pony, Minty was munching on her hay. > Good Morning Minty, Ready for today’s ride? < asked Kayla sarcastically. Kayla tacked up Minty and led her into the indoor ring. It was 7 AM and no one else was around. Miss Jess wasn’t up yet in the farm house and her daughter Sarah was at a sleep over. Kayla began trotting around in the ring, doing figure eights and diagonal changes. Suddenly she heard the indoor ring gate open and to her shock Sarah was leading her pony, May into the ring. > Oh, Kayla I wasn’t expecting you so early, you sure are dedicated to Minty< said Sarah laughing. Sarah began warming up as Kayla started cantering. Minty was suppose to learn the figure eight lead change. She does a lead change in the center to have the correct lead during the turn. Kayla couldn’t get her flying lead changes on Minty, just simple changes. Galloping around the turn, Kayla tried to get a lead change, but Minty just shook her head. Kayla stopped cantering to walk and watch Sarah do it on May. The gleaming thin palomino was effortlessly switching leads in the center. No wonder Sarah loved May, May listened while Minty just speeds around her turns like no tomorrow Kayla thought to herself. > Try to keep yourself sitting in the saddle Kay, Minty likes to throw all her weight on the front so make sure that you keep yourself upright < Sarah said trying to help. Kayla sat Minty’s canter and asked for a lead change and viola! Minty switched leads! Kayla was so happy, Minty was always her favorite no matter how she performed, but this was amazing. > You were right Sarah, sitting upright does help! < Kayla said enthusiastically. But Sarah didn’t hear her, since Sarah was jumping May over the course set up. May just swept each pole, each brush, each roll top swiftly under her feet. > Good girl May! < shouted Sarah as she cooled out the tired pony. Kayla cantered Minty around the turn and headed for the roll top. Minty just cleared it like there was no tomorrow. Minty finished the last jump, the cross rail. Heading around the turn she cooled Minty out and led her into the center isle. The barn was lively and bustling with lesson takers, boarders and leasers. Miss Jess was organizing the next show while grooms took care of the boarders ponies. Kayla felt a tap on her should and swung around to see her friends Roncy and Emerson.
> Hey Guys < said Kay trying to get Minty’s bridle off. > Did you hear? We all get to go to RainWood for the A show! < Said Emerson exited.Kayla couldn’t believe it! She and Peppermint Princess were actually going to a show tomorrow! She could already hear : In first place we have Kayla Price on Peppermint Princess. > I of course have to ride Jack and Roncy will ride Destiny < added Emerson. > Well I have lunch back at home, bye guys < said Kayla and hurried off home.
Chapter 2 : The Show

Kayla could hardly wait! Her bike couldn’t carry her fast enough to the farm she was so exited. Only Emerson, Roncy, Sarah and her were going since the limited show cash they had left. Show cash is currency at the barn. You had to much out stalls or help around to earn it. You can spend it on free rides, special show requests or go to big A rated shows. Several kids waste there money on free rides while certain sparing kids use it to ride at big shows. Kayla threw her bike to the bike racks and swung herself into Minty’s stall. Her portable tack trunk was packed, her pony was bathed and groomed to perfection and her friends were all doing the same. Emerson was braiding Jack and Roncy was applying hoof polish. Unfortunately Destiny and Minty didn’t get along that well so they had to be in separate trailers which costed Roncy and Kayla several more bucks. As they loaded into the trailers, Roncy and Sarah hopped into one truck driven by Sarah’s dad (the owner of the farm) Leonard and Emerson and Kayla hopped in Miss Jess’s truck. Along the way Miss Jess talked about what to do when we get there. Since they were only an hour away, everyone enjoyed looking at the scenery, talking about shows and about what to do in situations. When they got there, everyone unloaded there ponies and sure enough, Minty was already trying to kick out at ponies with pinned ears. Minty was a very sensitive mare. If ponies tried to bite she would kick without hesitation. The WhisperWind Farm riding team was :
Sarah Twine on May Bell Fairy, Emerson on Black Jack, Roncy on Destined to Be and Kayla on Peppermint Princess. They all had to be in the same classes so they chose several divisions such as Short Stirrup, Pleasure and Working Hunter 2 feet. 9 classes, 4 riders to win it, its on.
First class was pleasure walk trot. The girls tried there best but each pony had some problem. Roncy actually fell off Destiny when the pony spooked at the loudspeaker! It was now walk trot canter. Kayla waited to finally hear the “canter please” command. Minty lunged forward arching her neck and stretching out her legs. Continuing with walk,trot and canter on the other side, Emerson won the class while Kayla and Sarah placed 3rd and 4th. Roncy placed 6th but was still good with a class of 22! Roncy and Emerson were the last 2 in the walk trot go as you please. Since Sarah and Kayla were doing pairs, they couldn’t do one of the classes. They were limited to 9 classes each. The division was won by : Emerson on Black Jack! Thats 5 points for the team! 1st place was 5 points 2nd was 4 etc. but a championship was 5!. Next they had Short stirrup. Kayla won the class with Minty but none of the other team member’s placed. They decided that the team should only do 1 over fences class instead of both. Kayla watched a red haired girl enter the ring on a dashing flea bitten grey. The spurred the pony on and yanked at the bit. Whipping the poor thing till it had no choice but to do a lead change after the first jump. The second jump it took clumsily and the third and fourth were off stride. The loudspeaker boomed : Mackenzie Peterson on Little Red Riding Hood. Kayla and Sarah were just gagging at the equitation. The first jump was stuttering and unbalanced and that was just the foundation for the course. She ripped and tried to control Little Red Riding Hood over fences but the mare just fought for control. Exiting the ring, all 14 riders in short stirrup medium pony waited anxiously for results. > The results are in for Short Stirrup Medium Pony < boomed the loudspeaker. The WhisperWind Farm huddled around the ring, all mounted and waiting for there placings. Cause it went over 13 riders, only 4 riders will leave without a ribbon. > And in first place we have :
Mackenzie Peterson on Little Red Riding Hood! < The crowd, was half in shock and half clapping. Mackenzie smiled and her parents seemed to be impressed with the shaky ride.
> In second place we have : Emerson on Black Jack! < Emerson was in shock. She grabbed her red ribbon and pinned it to her bridle.
> In third place we have : Kayla Price on Peppermint Princess! < The crowd cheered excessively. Kayla grabbed her pretty dandelion colored ribbon and pinned it to Minty’s bridle.
> In fourth, fifth, sixth, sorry trying to hurry up for Working Hunter < we have in order:
Sarah Twine on May Belle Fairy in fourth, Claire Va Donne on Fancy Pants in fifth and Roncy on Destined to be in sixth. < The WhisperWind Farm girls have all placed and now they were getting division placings!
> Now in order from seventh through tenth we have : Lily Ray on Running Wind, Hannah Lay on Brownie Cake, Olivia Brake on Time Break and Thomas Jones on Poison Ivy. The crowd cheers at the placers. But as Kayla lined up 8th for the victory gallops, she saw a tiny little dirty blonde haired girl in braids on a brown pony crying. Kayla felt guilty, this little girl was invited as a top circuit rider and didn’t place. Mackenzie was tenth and was trying to calm Little Red Riding Hood, the mare was prancing and freaked out at the yanking and Mack’s crop. It was just about the horse now, victory gallops are : walk in, trot the short side and canter 3 laps to the center on by one sort of like a drill team. One by one they entered the ring and the Microphone boomed:
10th, Poison Ivy, 9th, Time Break, 8th, Brownie Cake, 7th, Running Wind, 6th,Destined to be
5th, Fancy Pants, 4th, May Belle Fairy, 3rd, Peppermint Princess, 2nd, Black Jack and our champion, Little Red Riding Hood! All of the placers were cantering around waving their ribbon, slapping hands and waving. The Non placers got to trot around as the placers got to bow. Suddenly they heard the microphone screech. Little Red Riding Hood freaked out. Little Red reared and bolted, leaving Mackenzie in the dust. Mackenzie yelled : Catch that horse! Kayla and Sarah bolted after on foot. Emerson and Roncy stayed back to seal the gaits. The microphone boomed: Flea Bitten Grey on the loose. And that only made Red gallop more. The horse just ran straight into the woods that was in the direction of WhisperWind and Henrickton. Sarah stopped Kayla. > She’s gone, the police and local places have been notified. < said Sarah, and at that moment Kayla saw how big 16 year old Sarah was. Kayla saw how Sarah was right. Nothing they could do. The ride home was all about what could have happened. Emerson, Roncy and Sarah were grooming down the hard working horses. Kayla felt weird. Mackenzie didn’t deserve a horse as fine as Red but Kayla didn’t want Red running around Henrickton. All the freeways and hunters. Going home, Kayla didn’t feel good. Something was behind her. She couldn’t turn around. She just kept pedaling. Suddenly a truck came at her. She didn’t see any other way out. There was just a ditch and truck didn’t slow down. Kayla’s reflectors were at the barn so she had no way out. Off she through herself in the ditch. The mud and leaves stuck to Kayla’s body as the truck drove by and crushed her bike. It seemed to have been picked up under the hood but the truck kept going. Kayla was upset. She was sticky and wet with no way home and at least another mile if not two left to get home. Kayla felt something move behind her. She fell on the ground and screamed. And before her, stood a heavy breathing sweaty flea bitten gray.

Chapter 3 : We have to!


Shocked to see a horse in front of her, Kayla stood up and touched the mare. The mare was hot and slicked with sweat. It was Red. Red was too tired and probably wanted Kayla’s last horse cookie. Her shoulder had a cut and her tack was ripped up and reins broken. Kayla was less than half a mile from WhisperWind. She had to take this mare back. She grabbed the mare and headed back for the barn.
At the barn, Kayla turned on the lights and put her in an empty stall. She untacked and gave the mare a bucket of water and a piece of hay. > Kayla? What are, who is? < said a shocked Sarah coming in to check on the horses with Miss Jessica. > Kayla? Is this that show pony? < asked Miss Jessica confused. Kayla explained to them about the ditch and Red wanting her last cookie. > Red? < asked Sarah. > Its her nick name, while she’s here we can’t call her Little Red Riding Hood < Kayla explained. > About that K, we need to call up the Peterson’s and tell them that their horse has been found < Sarah said as her mom examined Red for injuries. Kayla was close to tears. > You can’t! Red would have a better life on the run than with the Mackenzie girl!
She whipped him to death and yanked and, and < Kayla caught her breath. Mackenzie couldn’t have Red, she was too fine of a horse for Mack. > Sweetie, Mackenzie and her father will be going out tomorrow and searching stable’s and fields for her horse, if they find Red here, they will think we tried to steal her. < Miss Jessica tried to be realistic. > But, what if < stuttered Kayla. > Kayla there is nothing we can do, I’m phoning them tomorrow when there line is up again < said Miss Jessica, taking her daughter back up to the house. > Kayla go home and sleep, its been a long day < said Miss Jessica as she walked back up to the white cottage. Kayla was in shock. Jessica loved horses, why would she want to risk this mare’s life to the girl who clearly has never had lessons before. Kayla had to think of something. She couldn’t do it alone though. Kayla whipped out her phone and texted Roncy and Emerson.
Kayla > Hey guys
I found red all alone on the road and now Miss Jess is going to call the Petersons and Red will be back with that horrible rider.
Come to WhisperWind ASAP

Emmy > On it

Roncy > heading over

A couple minutes later the girls were in Red’s stall. > We could send someone off into the woods with Red and while the Peterson’s are here Red would be gone < Emerson suggested.
> Remember Emmy, they have animal control in the woods looking for Red, if they see us with the horse it will look like we are trying to steal the horse < rebounded Roncy.
> What if, we put Red in my neighbor Kira’s shed, she can put her horse in the field but we can put Red in the shed < suggested Roncy. > But remember, Miss Jessica doesn’t like the idea of having a stolen horse in the barn, we are already short cut on funding, if they found out we stole a horse they would never let us have anymore funding < said Kayla. 
> what if they are selling Red? We could just pool our money to afford him and then we could use Red as a lesson horse. < suggested Emerson. > Ya lets do that, but first we have to see if Red can be used as a lesson horse < the girls whipped around to see Sarah walking in an suggesting it. > Sarah? What about your mom? < Kayla tried to make a full sentence.
> Kay Kay, its only 7 and I don’t have a bedtime < said Sarah.
> You forgot that I was in your chat too and I heard everything you were talking about < Sarah said laughing.
> Oh, well, would your mom like another lesson horse? < asked Emerson.
> Well, we only have 500$ left for another horse so you would need to buy it < said Sarah
> I have 167$, Emerson has 89$ and Roncy has 54$, Thats 310$ which is what Red is worth right now. < said Kayla adding in her head.
> I’ll phone Mr Peterson and ask him, you guys look through horse ads < said Sarah rushing off to the phone
Emerson whipped out her phone and all three girls huddled around it and read:
14 hand chestnut roan, green as grass, 650$
16 hand Morgan cross excellent jumper, perfect hunter prospect 3000$
11 hand chestnut pony perfect for lead line 400$
Just as the girls were loosing hope Roncy read this one out loud:
14.2 hand chestnut, perfect A circuit great for any hunter kid, bred after Pheelip and Overa. Going to first offer, 175$ call *** *** ****
The girls started phoning the number but it was busy. Already dawn they had spent the entire night looking for Red’s sale. Each girl tried dialing on there phones but nothing worked. Red was munching away at this hay like a hungry wolf. > come on! < cried Kayla and kept dialing and dialing. Minutes later a horse trailer from “ Pickwood Auction “ came up the drive way.
> No! < cried Roncy. Red just kept munching as Emerson and Kayla kept dialing. Out of the truck of the trailer jumped Mackenzie and an older fellow.
> We are here for this a Little Red Riding Hood little missy < said the older gentlemen.
> Where is it scrub < said Mackenzie haughtily. Kayla was filled with tears. Red was a beautiful horse, she couldn’t bare to see it be abused or sold in the auction.
All Kayla was > No I won’t let you! < Kayla ran off to the barn with Mackenzie tailing her.
Kayla through a halter with double end snap onto Red, shoving Roncy and Emerson out of her way. Kayla led the horse out of the barn and swung herself onto the horses back. The horse took off galloping into the field. Mackenzie tailed on foot with the older gentleman driving the trailer behind her. Suddenly there was no way out. The fence had cornered her and Red. They were trapped. Kayla swung her leg over Red’s back and buried her face in his mane. 5 minutes later she expected a Mackenzie and the truck driver to be there but all she saw was Emerson and Roncy with the ownership of Red.

Chapter 4 : Not quite saved


> What? Wheres Mackenzie? What are you holding? < Kayla asked confused.
> Mackenzie went home to her new riding lesson and I’m holding Little Red Riding Hoods Signature < said Roncy exited.
> Who own’s her? We only had 310$, how could that have afforded such a mare. < asked Kayla stroking Red’s mane.
> Well, We all own her but Sarah bought her and used our name, the 310$ will afford her a month of board < explained Emerson.
> Will she be used for lessons? < asked Kayla.
> I don’t think so, she is pretty exited with a rider and we don’t want little kids getting on a pony that could hurt them < said Sarah walking up to them.
> My Mom says that she has one month to bring it on for lessons, otherwise she’ll be sold < said Sarah nervously.
> We can do it, we have the entire June to train her, best month, best time, best horse < said Roncy petting Red.
> I guess, but we need to make sure that she doesn’t take up too many resources, if she takes up too much feed or hay and gives no lessons than its a loss. < said Emerson worried about the Farm.
Emmy was right, It was a big deal. Each riding horse at the school is depending on given lessons. $40 was enough to buy several feed bags and hay but only for the $40 that the lesson horse took in. 4 riders in a lesson times $40 each is $160 and brings in a lot, but thats not enough to pay off all the debt and overhead fees. Kayla understood and I think her friends understood that Red should be treated like a green horse. Emmy led the horse back into his stall and Roncy gave him some water. Kayla glanced at Minty’s stall to see her horse happily munching away at her dinner. Emerson and Roncy had a bigger issue that both of their leased horses are up for off site lease and that will overpower an on-site so they could loose their horses in a split second. But now the girls had Red, with Sarah’s help, she could work wonders for the riding school.
> Who’s Mackenzie’s new horse? < asked Kayla curiously.
Roncy showed Kayla her phone:
Dappled Grey Mare for off-site lease (LEASE ONLY)
Is approx in her -teens. Perfect starter pony, swift elegent legs and daisy gait perfect for any discipline! 5000 a year.
> Wait a minute < said Emerson worried. Emerson took off down the barn Isle.
> Jack! Are you there? < yelled Emerson as she walked franticly down the Isle.
Suddenly she froze dead in her tracks.
> Emmy? Emmy whats wrong? < yelled Roncy running after her friend.
> She's gone, someone took her and now I’ll never see her again < said Emerson silently.
Kayla couldn’t believe it! Someone must’ve seen Jack in the barn Isle and decided that she could just take him.
> Hey Girls, whats wrong? < asked Miss Jessica coming out of the indoor ring.
> You leased out Jack to Mackenzie! < barked out Roncy.
> What? No I haven’t leased him out. Why? < asked Miss Jessica confused.
> Have you taken Jack’s lease offer down from all the websites? < asked Kayla.
> No but I haven’t leased any ponies out off site for a while < said Miss Jessica, now worried.
The Pickwood Auction trailer, which turned out to be Pickwood Avenue’s trailer was gone.
> We know what happened now, Mackenzie stole Jack. < said Emerson depressed and sobbing.
Kayla couldn’t believe what she’s hearing. How could Mackenzie steal a horse? We were in the barn the entir-. Kayla just figured it out. While Roncy,Emmy and Sarah came up to tell Kayla about Red, Miss Jessica was sealing the deal with Mr Peterson and Mackenzie could just sneak Lace.
Emerson could bear the feeling of not having Jack at the Barn, she called her mom and went home early.
Kayla and Roncy had to do something….Fast.

-To be continued next month-


NOTE:
The players that appeared in this book are :
Rae of Sunshine - Emerson
Roncy - Roncy
xKaylenex - Kayla

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xKaylenex & Braided Gold Scarlet Sunrise
2015-03-22 19:01:40
Title: Wonder Chapter 2
By: ameliabrenes5

A week had passed since Katy had moved in. Katy was getting her riding techniques back. Everyday, at 10:00, Cindy and Katy would meet for a ride. Cindy would ride Lily, and Katy would ride Jasmine. But today was different. Cindy couldn't come for a ride today, she had to visit her grandma for the day. Katy had tacked up Jasmine, and was mounting her. She led Jasmine towards the trail that they usually took and walked. After about ten minutes, they trotted, then cantered, and slowed back down to a trot. Then, Jasmine stopped. She was very still. Katy had enough experience with horses to know that something was about to happen. She shortened the reins and waited for something to happen. Then, out of nowhere, a beautiful handsome buckskin stallion came and halted in front of them. He had leaves, twigs, and burrows in his mane and tail. His coat had dust, and dried mud on it. Was he wild? No. He had a rope halter on. No wild horse would have a halter. Then, Katy realized something. She was looking right at her dream horse. Ever since she was a little girl, she had always dreamed of having a buckskin stallion called Wonder. No. She couldn't keep him, not after what had happened to Sandy because of her. But she could bring him to her house and make flyers saying that she found a lost horse. Yes, she would do just that. She dismounted Jasmine, then grabbed the buckskins halter, and led both horses to her house. When they got to the house, Katy tied Jasmine up, then put the buckskin into the pasture and bolted the gate behind him. Then she untied and mounted Jasmine. She was going to go return her. Then, she would make flyers for the buckskin.



When she got back, she found her parents at the door, arms folded. 'Uh oh.' Katy thought as she approached them. "Can you please explain why there is a horse in the pasture?" Her father asked. "Well, I was riding Jasmine when this horse came out of nowhere. I knew he wasn't wild, so I took him here. I returned Jasmine and was going to make flyers for a found horse when I got back." Katy told them. 'At least it was the truth.' Katy thought as she waited for her parents reaction. Gradually, they relaxed. "Ok, we believe you. Now, go ahead and make those flyers." Katy's mom said. Then, her parents returned to what ever they were doing before. 'Ok. I'll go get the camera, and take a picture of the buckskin.' Katy thought as she went upstairs to retrieve the camera.



"Perfect!" Katy exclaimed as she looked at one of the flyers the printer had printed. In black writing at the top of the page it said 'Found Horse.' Below it, it had a picture of the horse grazing. Then,under that it had information about the horse. Where it was found, the gender, the guessing of the age, which was five, the height, the color, and a number that the owner could call to talk with Katy or her parents. Katy looked outside, towards the pasture. The horse was grazing peacefully. An apple tree stood near him, shading him from the hot weather. Then Katy realized, she was falling in love with the horse. 'Snap out of it.' Katy ordered herself. 'Remember what happened to Sandy?' Katy tried to focus on something else. But it was too late, she had fallen in love with the horse.

ameliabrenes5 & Rascal
2015-03-24 00:21:38
i am here and you are there i am sad and you are mad i am jumping you are bumping and i love flowers and you dont please come again i tell you you say no way i am not a boot.
Princess Carmen & Jackie
2015-03-24 12:30:43
STORY DOES NOT CONTAIN PONIES

Story By: Princes Carmen
THE STORY OF MY BROTHER FALLING IN THE LAKE AT THE COTTAGE
one day we were at my grandmas cottage and we wanted to go swimming and so we got are swimsuits on and then my brother ran on the dock and splosh he was in the lake without a swimsuit and just pants and a shirt and he replied IM NOT GOIN BACK ON THAT DOCK TIL NEXT SUMMER OR TIL IT IS WARM WAIT HOW ABOUT IN THE WINTER WHEN IT IS ICE COLD ps. the how about in the winter was sarcastic! LOL
BY: Princess Carmen

Princess Carmen & Jackie
2015-03-24 12:39:12
Title:Horse's View
BY: Honca

From the day I was born , I've always wanted to see life from another point of view.I wanted to be something else, I wanted to experience something different than seeing hooves and being whipped.I didn't want to see disrespecting riders abusing their horses and ponies. Whipping for me was like getting your soul broken down into a billion pieces,and for the rest of your life you go out looking for those broken pieces.

I always started my day with a quick sip of water and a bit of oats,because that's all the time I had before the rider came in, I think his name was Will, because I've heard that name being called several time each day.

But one day, something went different in my morning schedule.Will came in earlier, we did not go riding in the course, we went out on the streets, where carriages, where quite common.Will was very quiet
that day, he seemed sad.As soon as we approach the big, beefy man in the black coat,I halted to a stop, that man didn't seem like a friendly fellow.Will pushed me on, and I went, still listening to click it atat sound of all the hooves of the other ponies and horses cantering and trotting across the ground.I came to a stop right in front of the big unusual man.I listened to those two people chattering away like those chipmunks that visited me often in my stall.soon, It started to get dark,Will took of my gear and led me into a new place.I saw Will,he walked away,I did not mind because I was not very close to Will.
That night, I had dreamed about my life long dream.Seeing thing from another point of view.I dreamed that I was a bug, sadly I woke up when I heard hideous sounds from the house next door, I got very startled, I started kicking frantically. I had no control over my body, fear had taken over. But as soon as I got more in control, I didn't recognize anywhere. I didn't remember those trees.Or that bush. I heard some yells, they were coming closer, so I ran to the next cave over, It wasn't such smart choice, since something in that cave caught my eye.

AS I started getting closer, I noticed a frail woman sitting next to a bright fire, she told me to sit, so I did. I didn't know how I understood her, but I DID!Before I knew I had opened my mouth and she knew what I wanted.With a wave of her hand the fire turned blue.She muttered some words and I fell asleep.

When I woke up, I didn't know what had happened, but I felt different. I had hands, not hooves, I had to learn how to control to my new features. My wish had come true.

THE END



Honca & Sylvie
2015-03-25 22:24:46
Nationals Part 2
AuthorToBe

I groan and try to roll over to slap my alarm. As I shift my weight to the side I feel an annoying pinch at the crook at my elbow. I slowly open my eyes and realize it isn't my alarm that's beeping. That would be my heart monitor.

"Well, look who's awake." Smiles my best friend Amy.

"Always aim to please." My voice sounds weird, scratchy from disuse. "How long was I out?"

"About five hours, nothing too major."

"What happened?"

"Goodbye spooked at something and took off at the wrong time. She changed her mind mid-take off and stopped right before the jump. You were already in position so you flew right over her head. Your head hit the side of the jump on the way down. The paramedics said you blacked out on the way over." Amy's usually sunny green eyes are filled with concern. "Your parents are in the cafeteria right now. Do you want me to go get them?"

"No, let them eat. Did the doctor say what was wrong?"

"He said if you stayed unconscious much longer then there would be probable brain damage or something."

"Oh that's lovely."

"As it is, he said it's probably a major concussion and you would be staying at least overnight to make sure there's no brain swelling."

Amy may only be my best friend, but my parents treat her like my sister and their daughter. So I'm not really surprised that she knows so much about my condition.

Another question has been nagging at the back of my mind, something I'm absolutely terrified to ask.

"How's Goodbye?" I ask, my voice small.

Amy's green eyes meet mine and my heart misses a couple of beats before she says. "Her sudden stop pulled several muscles in her legs. She's alright, but she'll need stall rest for several days while the muscles heal. Then it'll be light walking. There's also the probability she won't be able to handle as much heavy joint work." Amy smiles at me, knowing she caused me a minor heart attack. I throw an extra pillow at her.

"I'm just relieved she's alright." Just then the door opens and my parents step in.

"Sienna!" They cry simultaneously.

"Why didn't anyone tell us you're awake?" asks my father.

"We didn't want to disturb you." Amy answers smoothly.

Next to enter the room is my doctor. I smile as the friendly doctor enters the room. "I thought they said you were awake." His voice is smooth and pleasant, oozing comfort. "The results of your last tests are in. They have determined that you have a very extreme concussion. We would like to keep you overnight for observation, to make sure no brain swelling occurs." Amy shoots me an I-told-you-so look. "After you return home, bed rest with light activity for a month. Then we expect you to come in for an evaluation and another milestone. Your head injury is very severe, so that means absolutely NO riding before my say so."

My eyes shift to the ground. I know that means it'll be a long time before I'm back in the saddle. I flick my eyes up for a moment to meet the eyes of the doctor. "I understand." Then I look away. I can't wait to get home.

AuthorToBe & Sweet Adeline
2015-04-01 03:18:52
why is ant my poem on here?
BreyerCrazy123 & Flash
2015-04-01 15:53:52
umm........ok
alaska1434 & prince charming
2015-04-03 17:42:08
if your entry is not here Breyer, please enter the April contest with it.
Jane Crandal & JB
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This is Club Pony Pals, the official Pony Pals game and virtual horse world. Here you can adopt, ride and care for the pony you always wanted. Our site is based on the Scholastic books about three girls by Jeanne Betancourt.

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