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Message thread at CPP
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**** Writers and Book Lovers ****
post one of your favourite books and your story and you're in, there are competitions for best stories | Hi can I join I'm reading a series called The Raven Mysteries! Can I be VP2? | 
FamousLadyBug99 & Storm | | 2011-09-03 06:02:35 | | Hey, here's my info.
Name: Vanessa
Nick Name: Nessa
Age: 11
B-day: Jan. 4th
Eyes: Leave Green
Hair: Medium Length, Blonde, with a little pink.
Everyday clothes: Jeans, Thin Strap Shirt.
Show Clothes: Black Western Boots, Tan pants, Tucked in, blue western shirt, Helmet/Cowgirl Hat.
Horse: Juliet.
Show Name: Jules
Breed: Arabian
Shade/Color: Palomino
Everyday Tack: Pink Saddle Pad, Black Western Saddle, Pink Breast color, Pink Halter, with a Black, Polished Bridle.
Eye Color: Lighting Blue.
Thanks! | 
School Gal & Juliet | | 2011-09-03 20:17:34 | | | Guess What I Had The Best Day Of My Life Yesterday And Got Home And Found Out One Of My Dogs Are Missing :-( |
purplo9 & Midnight | | 2011-09-04 00:19:52 | | that wasn't the BEST day Amber it was the worst, how can you say it was still your best day? i know you had fun going to the what was it again? and all but the poor dog is missing, which one was it ? Annabelle or Cooper hope i got the names right,
i could use an extra VP so both of you are in as the other 2 VPs Mac and famouslady | 
fluffy23 & Moonlight | | 2011-09-04 01:04:37 | | Just scroll down and find your name, I haven't been on here long enough...
purplo9-I'm so sorry!! I can't imagen if either Fritz or Lacie ran away!
FamousLadyBug99- Cool! What's the Raven Series about??
poniesgirl2000: What's Life As a Wolf about?? I'm writing an animal book too! I haven't named it yet, but it's a sequal to my 4 chapter kids book 'Help!'.
MAC1023-What is it called, is it in the 11? If so, I'M NOT VOTING!! Sorry to be so harsh, it's just, my sister said that if she had an account (Which she does, I don't understand) she wouldn't vote for me. |
arabluv & teapot | | 2011-09-04 11:30:24 | | oh and here's the continuous to the story Absolutely Horse Crazy #1 Mystery Horse
Chapter four:
Rosy woke up as the alarm on her side table beeped. She walked down and saw her parents in the living area. “Rosy, you’re going away to stay with your aunt Miller at Red Rose City until we find a job. It wouldn’t be long just about two or three months. You’ll be leaving at Tuesday, you’ll first get on to the plane at nine am and change on to the bus at 5:00 pm and will get there at eight pm. Your aunt will pay for the fees†said Rosy’s dad. “We’ll get you as soon as possible.†Rosy’s mum said in a shaky voice.
Rosy said nothing, she ran in to the streets as tears run on her cheeks. She found herself in the stables not long and saw Izzy and Angel tacking up one of the school horse. “We need to talk… my mum and dads are sending me away to live with my aunt Miller at Red Rose City. I’ll be back in two or three months but I’ll miss you guys and Star.†Rosy said as once again tears filled in her eyes. “It’s alright, we’ll see each other, but we’ll miss you.†Izzy said as tears streamed down her cheeks.
Rosy walked over to Dancer’s stall to saddle her up, the most behaved pony in Winter Creek Stable. Just then Emily walked in. “So, here you’re leaving huh? I’m sure you’ll be better there than here. After you’re gone, your friends won’t miss you at all. It happened to me once, with a friend called Lily.†Emily said as she did a little laugh.
Rosy walked away with Dancer, thinking “Could Emily be right?†she rode Dancer around the dressage ring and practice dressage. After, she jogged down to her house. She had nothing in her mind that night. She had dinner and went up to bed. She buried her face inside the stuffed horse’s mane and cried. “Why do I have to go? Leave all my life and friends? They didn’t even tell me.†suggested Rosy.
Chapter five:
The birds were chirping and Rosy had pancakes for breakfast. After, she jogged down to the stable and started mucking out the stalls. Rosy usually do it after lessons but it was her last day at the stables so she wanted to enjoy it.
She walked in to the barn office and saw the people and a sign that said “GOOD BYE ROSY MONTE. WE’RE GOING TO MISS YOU SO MUCH!†Just then she turned around and saw the riders and Ms Wesley, the vet and her parents. “Here is a present from all of us, use it well.†said Angel and Izzy in unison. Rosy opened the package and saw a check for one thousand dollars and a scrapbook with their pictures in it. “Thank you, this will help a lot!†Rosy said as her eyes sparkled.
They saddled the school horses and went for a trail ride to say a good bye to Rosy. “Send us photos and everything, okay?†asked Angel. “Promise†Rosy said in a big wide smile.
They came back and from the trail ride, they hugged they cried and even Emily was kind of sobbing.
Rosy and her parents went back home, her mum packed her food for trip and Rosy and her dad packed her things but it didn’t take long because Rosy didn’t have much thing. She packed her best cloths, the horse models and a photo album of their family.
After Rosy went to sleep and dream about their family happy and Star was there with her, they were all living in a big house and there was a stable for Star.
Chapter six:
The alarmed beeped and Rosy woke up, she wore a purple shirt, a skirt and boots. That was the best clothes she had.
Her parents were waiting at the door. They caught a bus to the airport which took about an hour and a half. “We’ll miss you. Stay good at your aunts.†Rosy’s mum said as she waved to Rosy. Rosy waved back and she went on the plane to Red Rose City.
Hours passes by and she was about to change into the bus. It was going to be a long trip so she ate the piece of cake her mum had packed for her.
Finally she arrived and she saw her aunt and ran towards her.â€Rosy? You are so much bigger than I thought you are!†Aunt Miller said as she hugged Rose.
They went into her car and went straight for her house. When Rosy stepped out, she saw a barn and a big mansion. “Wow! How many acres is this?†Rosy ask as she took out her luggage. “We’ll get you a trip later but go unpack now.†Aunt Miller said as she squeezed Rosy’s warm hands.
Rosy walked into her room, the walls were painted dark purple, horse posters were on walls and books about horses was on the shelf. It was three times bigger than Rosy’s old room. “Wow! And it’s all mine.†Rosy said as she felt the velvety bed sheet with pictures of horses galloping on them.
Chapter seven:
Rosy walked into the barn with Aunt Miller, “Here are the horses, this mare is a French trotter, she’s two and a half and her name is Wind she’s my horse, this is Utter the welsh gelding, he’s three years old, he’s one of the residence in this stable like all the others, this is Fire the paint horse gelding and he’s four years old , this is Syrup the Shetland mare, she’s just one year old and eight months and this is Red, the Appaloosa mare…she’s really quite old, she’s six years age. So anyway go explore this land, it has lots of great adventures.†Aunt Miller said as she walked over to Wind.
Rosy walked all the way to the Destiny Lake when she saw Star and there was a necklace around the mares neck which looks like a diamond heart but the last time she saw the mare was at her bad fall. “Here star!â€Rosy said in a soothing voiced when she started clicking. Star trotted over to Rosy “Good girl.†Rosy whispered as she snatched the diamond necklace around Star’s neck.
She slowly opened the heart and found a letter which said:
Dear Finder of Star, my name is Hope and I am hoping Star has a good life with you. My Ma and Pa are going to sell Star for savage after we swept her at Winter Creek Stable with our horse Wish. I shipped her here with all the money I’ve got so she would be alive and if you are a horse lover, please take her as your horse, I don’t want her to be sold by salvage. Well Pa and Ma are back from the trip. Just have to say Star’s gone. Please take her as your horse, you’re her last chance. Hope
“Oh I have to find out what happened.†Rosy said as she hugged Star. She knew it was up into her.
She ran to the News Paper Organization with Star as she tied her to the pole near the shop and dug up a paper about Star being swapped. The article in the paper said: Star, the resident horse from Winter Creek Stable has been swapped with the champion horse Wish by the Angora family. Hope said “We’ll train her.†But after one or two days Mrs. and Mr. Angora said Star was only good use for salvage. Then Star mysteriously disappeared when they were on trip. If you seen her call 0876584 or come to Silver Bell Town, Westerns Street at 43 A (Prize of 80 bucks for turning back)
Rosy walked out of the News Paper Organization as she carried the paper in her hands.
She walked towards Aunt Miller’s house with Star and put her in the barn where Aunt Miller was. “Rosy who’s this?†Aunt Miller asked when Rosy handed the letter and the paper to her.
They had dinner and there was a whole utter of silence trough the whole time but Aunt Miller broke the silence, “ Rosy, there’s two side to this problem and I’m sure you know what they are anyway the best thing to do is if you want Star so much go talk to the family and buy her. I will give you some money if you don’t have enough.†Aunt Miller said as she patted Rosy on the back. It’s alright I have one thousand dollars, don’t worry.†Rosy said as she looked at the golden chandelier.
Rosy walked into her room, she lied down on her bed as she read one of the horse books which was The Black Beauty. Slowly, she went to sleep.
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fluffy23 & Moonlight | | 2011-09-05 07:36:11 | | | The Raven Mysteries is about a family that own a castle. The one I'm reading is about the kids father wants them to get a teacher but the children refuse. They ended up thinking their teacher is a were wolf! |
FamousLadyBug99 & Storm | | 2011-09-05 07:49:10 | | | Fluffy. I know how Rosy feels. Just try to imagen how I feel. I cry myself to sleep ALMOST EVERY night. I might be getting a horse (two actualy) and it's been on and off. |
arabluv & teapot | | 2011-09-05 09:55:40 | | | We found Annabelle ! (YAY) |
purplo9 & Midnight | | 2011-09-05 10:05:07 | | | can i join? |
pp2 & Finnigan | | 2011-09-05 19:31:33 | |
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