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***I ¢¾ Writing Club*** i a club about writing. We could type stories we are writing and let other people look over them and give us more ideas.

I Think my favertoite stroy i wrote is about cats
Starwalker123 & Star
2012-06-06 01:35:07
okay we are going to have a contest. please post the story you are going to enter in the contest by the 1st.
pp2 & Finnigan
2012-06-19 00:11:52
tThis is the next part to my story
Kate, “Yes.” Gets back on Freedom and canters a big circle.
Mrs. G , “Go ahead Kate.”
Kate gallops Freedom over the jumps.
Mrs. G, “Good now calm him down and try again.”
Kate calms the gelding and jumps again.
Mrs. G, “Good cool them down and then muck out the lesson horses stalls.”
The kid cool down and stable their horses.
Lucy, “There is 12 school horses, and 2 donkeys.”
Noah “and four of us.”
Lucy leads the way to the lesson horse stalls.
Lucy, “We can all clean three and work together on the donkeys. Kate you will do Strawberry, Ruby and Tango. Noah you can do Raven, Cookie and Champagne. Nate you can do Milkshake, Cherry and Lucky, I’ll do Aurora, Honor and Rain. We can all do Dash and Streak.”
The kids clean the stalls. They meet up at Dash and Streaks two stall barn.
Lucy, “It’s weird she got us horses.”
Noah, “It is.”
Nate, “Not really we are top riders, Lucy on Honor, Kate on Tango, Noah on Champagne and Me on Lucky.”
Lucy think of all the times shed won ribbons on Honor. “Your right.”
Kate, “Let’s work.”
Kate and the boys start to work. Lucy grasps a rake and gets to work too. 30 an hour later the kid finish work it is 12:oo o’clock
Lucy, “We should go to my place for lunch. But we can’t tell her about the horses.”
Nate and Noah, “Thank Luc we told mom we were going there for lunch this morning.”
Kate, “Thanks Luc.”
The kid say good bye to Mrs. G and Mr. G (her husband) I head to the bike rake. Lucy unlocks her purple bike, Kate her plain gold one, Noah his green and gold mountain bike, and Nate his Red and Gold Mountain bike. The kids bike up the hill to Lucy white two story house. Lucy and her friends park their bikes and go inside.
Lucy, “Mom, Kate, Noah, Nate and I are here for lunch.”
Lucy’s mom(Susan), “come in to the kitchen.”
The hungry kids come in to Kitchen.
Susan, “Hi guys I have peanut butter or Tuna.”
Kids, “Tuna please.”
Susan next sandwiches and hand them out.
Nate, “Thank Susan.”
After lunch the kids bike back to the barn.
Lucy, “Want to see if we can go for a trail ride?”
Mrs. G walks over, “Lucy your leading an hour ride in 10 minutes.”
Lucy, “Yes Mrs. G.”
Mrs. G, “boys your helping Mr. G put up the fence in the back field and Kate you are going with Lucy.”
Lucy, “Can I take Star.”
Mrs. G, “Yes and Kate your on Tango.”
Lucy and Kate, “Thanks Mrs. G.”
Lucy goes to Stars stall. She leads out the black Gelding. Kate brings the gray Arab gelding It Takes Two To Tango or Tango over. The Girls Saddle up and Lead the horses outside. The other Riders are not regulars at the Stable, A girl is riding Strawberry, a boy on Cherry and a man on Ruby. The man looks to be the kids dad.
Lucy, “Mount up.”
The family mounts.
Lucy says, “Have you ridden before?”
The girl on Strawberry says, “Yes at a farm near where we live.”
The dad and boy nod no.
Lucy, “ok, so meadow Trail it is.”
Kate walk Tango a circle.
Lucy, “I’ll go first and Kate will ride at the end.”
Lucy leads the way followed by the girl then the boy then the dad, last is Kate and Tango. The ride out in to the meadow.
One hour later the girls stable the horses and groom then. Lucy and Kate meet the boys at the bike rake.
Noah, “How was your Afternoon?”
Lucy, “Good Star is a dream .”
Kate, “I rode Tango.”
Nate, “We had a good time fixing fence for the newest horse a mini named Cookie she is having a foal soon.”
Lucy, “Cool.”
Chapter Two Morning Run
Lucy woke up the next morning and headed over to the stables up her bike. When she got there she grab Star’s Bridle and her helmet. The she ran to Star’s stall. Lucy swiftly bridles the gelding and mount canters out of the stable. She slows to open the gate and is off again.
Lucy yells, “Come on Star.”
The girl and horse are flying.
Star nickers in human, “I’m a unicorn form the other place or Land of a Thousand Myths.”
Lucy, “Want?”
Lucy stops Star and get off.
Star starts to change into a white horse with a white horn; the horn has a gold jewel.
Star, “That’s better.”
Then Kate on Freedom comes up. Lucy hears the same thing happen and Kate get down and stands with her.
Freedom change to a white horse with a white horn the horn has a Sliver jewel. The twins come ride up and the same thing happens. Blue get’s a Blue jewel and Sunset gets a red jewel.
Star, “OK so I’ll explain everything.”
Lucy, “Thank you.”
Star, “In our home there is a great war, The young princes who are 13 were sent away to be safe they were sent here there name’s are Prince Nathan Martin or Nate and Prince Noah Martin or Noah.” Looks at Noah and Nate before going on, “That’s you two, You sent here for a different reason too how ever to find Wife that you could merry in a few years.” Look at Lucy and Kate goes on, “Noah and Nate left 5 months ago after making a weapon to end the war. Blue, Freedom, Sunset and myself left two days ago to fetch home out princes and their girls. “
Star shakes his head and Lucy sees a gray stone and a gray stone with letters craved on it on a gold chain around his neck. Star sees Lucy looking at his gate necklace.
Star, “Lucy that is a gate necklace the one with the letter is for talking through the gate with the gate master and the other opens it. The gate is how we get here and back. Time to go Prince Noah will you take off the necklace.”
Noah removes necklace and Says, “Wants next?”
Freedom, “I’ll say the spell if you’ll hold that to my horn.”
Lucy says, “Our parents.”
Star, “The real Noah and Nate of this time will come back. Your parent will have different kids.”
Noah holds the opening stone to Freedom’s horn will he lowers it.
Freedom, “A rip in the sky, Home, home.”
A rainbow color hole appears near the ground.
Unicorns, “Get on”
The kids mount their unicorn friends. The unicorns step into the gate. ½ a second later they reappear on the other side. A white haired Girl runs up.
The Girl says, “How was it?”
Star, “Good Sara meet Lucy and Kate. Lucy and Kate meet Sara Daughter of The gate Keepers. She is a mage of Earth and Noah and Nate best friend.”
Sara , “Hello Kate, Lucy, Nate and Noah. I missed you so Noah and Nate.”
Nate says, “Hello Sara.”
The kids get off the Unicorns.
Blue, “So Sara is Fate here yet.”
Sara, “No but soon.”
Sunset, “We have less time then we think.” Looks at the puzzled girls ,”I have the power to sense the future.”
Blue, “I have the power of water.”
Star nods sadly, “I have no powers.”
Freedom, “I have the power of wind.”
Sara hand a sword belt to Noah.
Sara, “Your sword Dawn Flame.” Hands Nate one, “Your sword Dragonclaw .” hand Lucy a bow and a quiver arrows, “This is Swift Wind.” Hands Kate a bow and a quiver arrows “This is Last Breath.”
Noah and Nate, “Thank for watching then for us.”
Lucy and Kate, “Thank you.”
Sara, “Were is his.”
I’m here a voice echo as a small leapercon appears.
Noah, “Fate. Kate Lucy this is Fate oracle and seer to the king. He was last of his race.”
Kate, “Nice to meet you.”
Lucy, “Good to meet you.”
Fate, “No time no time. I have a prophecy for you.”
Noah, “Go For It.”
Fate, “One can lead, Child of Earth, Children of the other place. Son of Ryolty’s blood, shall save.”
Noah, “Thank you Fate.”
Fate, “I have to get back.” The little guy disperse’s.
Star, “Time to go.” Sees that Noah is holding the necklace. “Put that on.”
Noah puts on the gate necklace and mounts Sunset, Nate mounts Blue, Lucy mounts Star, and Kate mounts Freedom. Sara whistles and a purple Pegasus joins the group.
The Pegasus says, “I’m Grape.”
Sara mounts Grape.
Noah, “were to first?”
Star, “The Village of New Hope. Let us be off.”
The unicorn and winged Pegasus gallop off.
Chapter Three Village
2 hours later the group gallops into a village. The people stare at the unicorns and kids. The group comes to a stop in village square. The kids get off.
Sara, “Come on you guy.”
Star, “Blue, Freedom, Sunset, Grape and I will want here.”
The kids head in to the open air market. Sara stops at potion vender. She picks up a bottle containing a purple substance.
Sara, “How much.”
The Vender owner says, “20 bits or 1 crown.”
Sara, “Ok I’ll take it.” Flips him a Crown. Picks up a bottle with a blue substance. “And this how much.”
Vendor, “ Same.”
Sara toss him a crown. Sara walks away Noah and Nate yell wait up. Sara spots and Lucy, Kate, Noah and Nate run over to her.
Sara, “The Blue is Healing and Purple is truth syrup it will make you tell the truth.”
Noah, “Good picks.”
Sara goes to a market vender she grabs 10 blankets , 5 water canteens, 5 back packs, a first aid kit, a bag of 10 apples, 10 carrots, a cold pack, some jerky and hard tack, a langue of rope and 2 sword belts.
Sara, “How much.”
Vendor Man, “50 crowns.”
Sara hands the man the crowns. The kids head back over to the horses. Sara puts the carrots, apples and cold pack in to one pack, the hard tack and jerky in next, in the next she puts first aid kit and the potions, in the next she puts the blankets, in the last she put the rope and canteens.
Sara, “We will carry a bag a piece.”
Sara hand Noah the cold bag, Nate the food bag, Lucy the Blanket bag and a belt, Kate the rope and canteens. Sara shoulders the first aid kit and potions.
Nate, Noah, Kate, and Lucy shoulder the bag and mount the unicorns.
Star, “Were too?”
Sara, “Let head to a camp on the river.”
The group heads away.
Star, “Lets Fly.”
Star gallop up in to the sky. Lucy slip back and set up straight. The herd of unicorns and riders soar through the sky.
Lucy says, “This is great.”
Star, “Yes it is.”
Freedom, “Kate. I’m soon for make you fall.”
Kate, “It’s ok.”
4 hours later
Sara, “down.” Grape lands.
The unicorn and riders land.
Sara, “ Let’s set up a camp.”
The kid dismount they unshoulder the bags. The clearing by the water is perfect camp.
Noah, “Nate get fire wood.”
Nate runs off in to the woods.
Noah, “Sara matches?”
Sara, “I have some.”
Noah, “Lucy find some sticks.”
Lucy goes to the woods.
Noah, “Kate get beds made.”
Kate gets out blankets and starts making the beds. She folds five into pillows. And lies the rest out.
Later On at dinner time
The kid gather round the fire.













Starwalker123 & Star
2012-06-19 22:57:06
Can it be part of a story? Because I have started a story and I was wondering if I could post what I have written so far.
MAC1023 & King
2012-06-19 22:57:06
Yes MAC it can be part of a story. But when you get more written you could post that also!!
pp2 & Finnigan
2012-06-22 00:59:56
Okay! Thanks for letting me know! This is part of my story called Impossible:

It was impossible to say that she wasn’t beautiful. She had a face like an angel’s and long hair as white as snow. But the most captivating thing about her was bright blue eyes. They were the color of the crystal clear ocean.
It was also impossible to call her beautiful. She was capable of causing eternal destruction, but she never had. People were afraid of would could be, not what was. So instead of cowering from her or praising her, they just walked along and ignored her, pretending that she was just another common person. When in fact everybody knew that someday, they would have to face the fact that she was a very special person, and indeed, she was. And it seemed that the only person who didn’t know it was herself.
* * * * *
I was hopelessly lost. The snow swirled around me and I frantically looked around, but saw nothing but the snow. I took a few steps and then I felt myself falling. I opened my mouth to scream, but nothing came out. Before I knew it, I was floating in the air, the cold mountain breeze carrying me.
I saw a white bird flying towards me. It held something in its mouth and it perched on my head. I felt the talons digging into my scalp, but I remained still. It was as if a mirror appeared, and I could see myself. I was wearing a beautiful crown, made out of snowflakes and my dress had turned to a royal blue. I was fit to be a queen.
“Crystal!” a sharp voice pulled me out of my daydream. I wasn’t in the mountains floating on the air, I was in a chair in my room supposed to be studying Latin. It was warm out and I certainly wasn’t a queen. I was a princess.
To tell you the truth I wasn’t very excited about being a princess at times. In this world, there were five elements; air, water, fire, light and darkness. And a queen and king ruled over their section of the land. Then they had children and when they were old enough, they married a commoner and ruled the land until they had a child and the same process would happen. When they married the commoner, a special process was made for the commoner to have the power.
My parents had the power of air. I had no powers. This was the first time it had ever happened. No one knew why, I just didn’t have a power like the other children of the king and the queen.
“Crystal this is no time for day dreaming! You are supposed to be learning Latin!” my teacher shrieked. Her name was Alison, but I secretly called her Mrs. Devil. She always nagged me about everything and it really got on my nerves! I tried, and I mean really hard to get along with her, but I just couldn’t.
“Sorry, but I find this stuff horribly boring!” I replied. I picked at my finger nails and became absorbed in it.
“Crystal, not everyone has to… Could you please listen to me for once?”
“Huh?” I looked up from my nails. I picked up my pencil and began to doodle in the margin of my paper. “You can go on with whatever you were saying.”
“This is exactly what I mean! You never… You know what? No, I’m done with this! Go ahead and do whatever you want!” Alison fell back into the chair and massaged her temples.
I sometimes felt sorry for her, she did have to put up with me and all, but then I saw her again, and the sorrow went away. I studied her face and almost burst out laughing. She was wearing orange mascara and it made her look horrible, even worse than she usually did.
“Well if you insist,” I said and jumped and walked out. I began to run to the front door and I burst out into the sunlight. I kicked off my shoes and ran barefoot into town to find Ethan.
I ran into town and nearly ran over a pendant. “Sorry!” I called out. I stopped at Ethan’s house, but he wasn’t there. I wondered over to a crowd and I found Ethan.
“Hi!” I said.
“Oh hey! What are you up to?” he asked.
“Oh, you know, skipping Latin. She actually told me to! You’ll never believe this, but she was wearing orange mascara!”
“No way! She must have looked awful! More awful that usual, might I add!”
“She did! I swear I almost died! So what have you been up to?”
“Oh, you know the same thing,” Ethan replied. He took off running towards the woods and I followed him. He ran to the place in the woods we always go.
When we were little, we found this place in the woods and have gone there ever since. It’s like a little field with no trees and a small stream running through the woods. It has some rocks, and we always sit on them and talk about stuff.
I lay down on the grass and Ethan sat on a rock.
“Do you want to come for dinner tonight?” I asked.
“Sure,” Ethan replied. “Does life ever make you mad?”
“All the time. I remember when I was little; I was so distraught over not having any powers. Now I’m pretty much over that. I just wonder sometimes, what it would be like.”
“But you do have powers,” Ethan whispered. He then shook his head and smiled.
I gave him a questioning look. “What’s bothering you?”
“Everything. Heather is going crazy; she balls her eyes out every night because she doesn’t have a boyfriend and is ‘never going to find true love’.” Ethan rolled his eyes.
I laughed. Heather, his older sister, was known for being a little… eccentric. “Why is she crying? I mean honestly, we should be the ones sobbing! We’re both nineteen and have never dated. She’s twenty two and had how many boyfriends?”
“Exactly what I told her! Then my mom is all on my case to go get a girl so we can marry and get out of the house.”
“She said that?”
“No, but I know she wants me out. She always complains about all the work she does, when really, I do more than her. I know she feels that she has so much to do, but everyone in my family needs to grow up!” Ethan jumped up and started to pace.
“Are you sure you’re okay? You’re not ever like this,” I said.
“I’m fine. I just… I just need some time from my family,” he said. I nodded.
“My mom has been doing the same with me. She nags me every day about marriage!”
Ethan nodded and started to walk away. “I’ll see you later,” he said.
He has to be hiding something from me. He never acts like this, even when he is mad at his family.
* * * * * I ran into the dining table and sat next to Ethan. I had run up to my room to brush my hair to make it look at least presentable. I looked down at it and it seemed to glow. I loved its color, white. Just plain white, like the snow.
“What did you do today Crystal?” my mother asked.
“Just hang out with Ethan. Oh, and I made Alison mad.”
“Crystal, she’s your tutor. You’re supposed to treat her with respect,” my father sighed.
“Well she never treats me respectfully! I try really hard, so hard, it’s like I don’t try at all!”
Ethan started to laugh and I joined him. My father started to laugh too, but stopped with a sharp glance from my mother.
“She even decided to wear orange eyeliner!” I added.
“That is no reason to make her mad,” my mother said.
“It’s funny, sometimes she acts really strict, but then she backs off, like I’m going to magically get powers and hurt her,” I laughed. I looked around and saw that my parents weren’t laughing.
“I heard that the weather is cooling down,”
“How is your family doing Ethan? I talked with your mother today,” my mother asked.
“Oh, um, they’re fine. Everything’s good.” Ethan replied nervously. I thought I saw him blush, but I pushed the thought away. He never blushed.
“That’s good. I hear that she’s looking for a wife for you.”
“Oh gosh. Yeah, she’s practically handing out flyers! I just hope… I just… She gets into my business a lot.”
“That would be hard,” my mother sympathized. I opened my mouth to say something, but I had stuffed it with bread, so I closed it.
“But Crystal needs a husband too,” my father said.
“Daaaad!” I moaned. I hated getting onto this topic with him.
“Isn’t that ironic? Two people, needing a spouse, in the same room?” my mother asked.
Ethan quickly stood up and pushed his chair in. “Thanks for the dinner,” he said, and quickly left.
“Bye!” I called after him. I wonder what that was about.
“Crystal…” my mother started.
“Yeah?” I asked.
“How do you feel about Ethan?”
“We’re friends…” I said slowly.
“Well how would you feel if…” my mother didn’t have time to finish before I slammed my chair to the ground.
“YOU WERE TRYING TO SET US UP?!” I screamed. My parents shrieked and I looked down at my clenched fists. They were on fire. Suddenly the fire shot from them and my parents had to duck to avoid getting incinerated. Then strong winds formed. It took me a moment to realize that I was controlling all of this.
“I have powers?” I shouted. The winds died down and then water burst from my hands. It spiraled up to the ceiling.
“Why didn’t you tell me?” I asked between gritted teeth. The lights above us got brighter and brighter until they exploded. Glass rained down on me.
“You lied to me!”
“We had to! If you knew that you could control everything, it would put the entire realm into danger!” my father shouted.
“You could have told me! You lied to me for this long, and now I will be dangerous!”
“Crystal, please. Just calm down,” my mother said.
“How can you expect me to calm down?!” I screamed. The lights came back on. My father walked over to me and forced me down into a chair and held me there. I struggled to get out.
“It’s time Gabriel.” My mother whispered. I stop struggling.
“Crystal,” my mother said. “I’m sorry for doing this to you. Now you have to learn to control your powers. You will go to each kingdom and be instructed by each Prince or Princess. You’ll leave in the morning.”
“How long will I be gone?” I asked.
“A long time,” she replied. I was fuming now. First they lie to me, then they send me away! I burst from my father’s grip and ran out the door to Ethan’s house.
* * * * *
“Ethan!” I called. Ethan was outside and I ran into his arms. Ethan shook me.
“Crystal! What’s wrong?”
“They lied to me! I do have powers!”
“You do? Why did they lie?”
“I can control everything! Fire, water, air, light, and they thought I would be dangerous so they lied to me! Now they’re sending me away!” I hugged Ethan tighter to me. “I don’t know when I’ll be back.”
“How long did they say?” he asked.
“They said a long time. They’re afraid that I’ll kill them or something. What if they never let me come back?”
Ethan grabbed me by the wrist and walked me back to the castle. When we were out of sight of his house. He took me up in his arms.
“I love you Crystal,” and he kissed me. It was such a shock to me that I pulled away. Ethan stared at me and I avoided his gaze.
“I… I really have to go,” I said.
“Wait! Don’t leave yet,” he said quietly.
“I have to go home and pack,” I said, and ran off, leaving Ethan behind.


MAC1023 & King
2012-06-23 00:41:16
Will someone take over the club this week?? I'm going to camp. If you want I'll write a (mostly true) story about it!
pp2 & Finnigan
2012-06-25 13:41:52
Okay anyone who hasn't posted a story yet post one by the 7th.
pp2 & Finnigan
2012-07-04 13:46:41
I've made changes to Warrior.
Should I enter it into the story contest? Or should I do another, I have a ton of little bits of stories...

chelsea2 & Irish
2012-07-06 18:55:10
Warior
Starwalker123 & Star
2012-07-10 23:36:01
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