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***I ¢¾ Writing Club*** i
a club about writing. We could type stories we are writing and let other people look over them and give us more ideas. Well, your right. Here's the prolouge:
The small pale yellow mare hurried to the throne room. King Ramai of Eskanorra sat proudly on his golden throne. She lowered herself flat on the ground. "My lord, I have found princess Gwenith." The evil stallion looked interested. "I knew we'd find her. Queen Rania was foolish to think she could hide her lovely daughter for long. So, where is she?" The servent mare tried to speak, but she trembled and shook. No words left her mouth. "Buttercream, I asked you a question!" he roared. "Answer or die!" Buttercream became even more pale. "Lord Ramai, I saw her and some other ponies in Goldenwood. She-she is alive, and still a foal. But I suspect she will grow soon- I believe it's been almost 20 months sice Rania hid her." The mare was quiet again, but only for a breif time. "Actually, it shall happen the day after tomorrow to be percise, master." Lord Ramai cackled evilly, and the poor servent rolled her eyes and fainted. "Soon," he sneared. "soon I will have my queen. The key to the secrets of succsess!"
If you want to hear Chapter1, You'll have to post the requeast!;) If enough people ask, I might even post more! | 
Dragon Girl & Frodo | | 2012-11-17 03:31:02 | | | Post more its Good | 
Starwalker123 & Star | | 2012-11-17 05:08:58 | | | Pppppppppppppppppppplllllllllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee post the rest! | 
pp2 & Finnigan | | 2012-11-17 21:43:56 | | | Ok! |
Dragon Girl & Frodo | | 2012-11-18 22:42:34 | | Here it is:
(note this chapter is boring but very important)
Chapter1
Gwenith watched her mother tuck in her brothers. When she reached her, Pumpkin pulled the quilt near her muzzle. "I love you Gweni." she whispered. "I love you mother." Pumpkin left the room and closed the door. Because the house was at least 100 years old, there were no lights to turn off. Gwenith's mother was old-fashioned and every peice of furniture was comfortable and home-made. They didn't own any electrical appliences, but they did have a gas stove and fireplace. Actually, Gwenith had no idea what microwaves or toasters were. She had always thought that she had lived that way. But she was completley decieved.
Gwenith was dreaming. She stood in her favorite meadow, the one that she and her brothers always played in. She noticed that her brothers were no where to be seen. In fact, it appeared that she was completely alone. No butterflies played in the sunshine. The birds weren't singing, and clouds cast dark shadows accross the ground. The grass was not green, and instead it was a dull, dry, tanish, yellowish, brown color. The stream was not clear, either. Now it was murky and dark. The wind blew harshley and everything was abnormal. Then Gwenith heard hoof-steps. Two ponies with windblown manes, long ram-horns, and firery eyes came closer to her, then stopped. To Gwenith, they loked quite familar. "Gwenith," called the shorter one, who's voice was gentle and soft. "it's good to see you after such a long time." Gwenith looked shocked. "You seem so familar, yet as I can recall, I have never even met you. The larger one stepped foward. His voice was deeper than the first one's, but he still sounded calm and kind. "We have known you since the moment of your birth. Though I am not surprised you forgot us. You were so young...." "But how? That is impossible!" The images began to fade. "Wait! Don't go!" Despite her desperate peas, the ponies vanished and she was in her room again. Yet the unanswered queastion still rattled in her brain. "Who were those ponies, and what were they trying to tell me?"
Don't worry. The story gets alot better. |
Dragon Girl & Frodo | | 2012-11-19 02:25:40 | | | ok, will post part of my stories, as soon as my own computer is fixed. | 
Avari Terrwyn Miles & Sheraga | | 2012-11-19 02:29:42 | | | The story i was currently working on is titled "Riverton Academy" and is about Kaydence Tangelo who has to travel from her families station (this is set in Australia) to Sydney for boarding school. Her parents also ship her silver-dapple taffy coloured horse, Lirit Symphony with her so she can attend Riverton Academy, a prestigious riding school. I have written up to her settling in at boarding school, but am stuck when it comes to her first riding lesson. The other students are all a bit snubby except for little Li Mei and her pony Cookie. They think, that coming from a station that she is not as bright or good as them and Kaydence has to prove she is just as good, if not better at the upcoming horse show. Any ideas to help? |
Avari Terrwyn Miles & Sheraga | | 2012-11-19 02:52:13 | | | Thanks! |
Dragon Girl & Frodo | | 2012-11-20 19:59:07 | | | I love it, but you kind of have to think human/horse, withch can be kind of hard |
pp2 & Finnigan | | 2012-11-21 01:28:52 | | Ok, her is the first part of my story....
Let me know if u want me 2 post more.
12 year old Kaydence Tangelo sat staring out the window, thinking about all that had happened to her just recently. Just the other day, she had been rounding cattle up and doing barrel-racing practice for the competition in Cloncurry next month, which is 100 kilometres from her home on Tangelo Station. However, today, she is aboard a train, headed for the city, which is roughly 2000 kilometres from Tangelo. Her eyes still red and stinging from crying, she buries her face in her pillow. She was warned and told about this happening for the last couple of months, the whole Christmas holidays, but Kaydence hadn’t wanted to accept the truth. She had been home-schooled and schooled over the radio as part of the School-of-the-Air program for the past 7 years while living at Tangelo, but her schooling could go no further if she stayed on the station. Her mum and dad were busy on the station and with her 3-year-old brother, Seriah, and the radio program ended at primary school. Her parents spent thousands of dollars buying her everything she would need for boarding school, her train ticket, and not only that, but for her horse to be transported to the same city and for Kaydence to attend a prestigious riding school with her own horse after school hours, so she wouldn’t be lonely or board and get homesick. Therefore, Kaydence found it hard to be ungrateful; her parents had saved up for this for months, but she was unhappy. It would be 3 months before she saw anyone in her family again. She buried her face deeper in the pillow for a few seconds, subsequently needing to come up for air. Sighing, she dug in her travel bag and pulled out one of her favourite books: Black Beauty. She shuffled around on the chair until she was comfortable, and began to read. She had a 2-day train trip ahead of her, and this would pass the time. |
Avari Terrwyn Miles & Sheraga | | 2012-11-21 01:32:34 | |
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